New And Improved Flier

[GreenClips]

Here Is My New And Improved Flier What Do You Think?

[GreenClips]

Sorry About That

[daveintoledo]

it really looks like something a kid made... get rid of the toro, make the services you are providing bigger, and the contact information bigger....

how many of these will you be haveing made, color copies are close to a dollar each...and printing them of your standard home printer will end up costing even more,..

you should look at some of the flyers on the gpher site, get some more professional looking ideas....

good luck...:)

[clallen03]

I think it looks much better than the first I seen you make. I kinda like it to be honest. Not to wordy and easy to read, but what is that god awful thing in the background behind yourname?

Let me tell you what I learn in Marketing 101. When an individual read a random flyer, there eyes start at the upper left hand corner and scans to the uppr right hand corner. This is why, IMO, you should always start your flyer with a phase that will get their attention. Example: "Do you want the best looking lawn in the community?" or "Spend more quality time with you family by leaving your lawn to us!"

If you havent got their attention yet their eyes slant down to the bottom left, just briefly glancing at the more important section of your flyer, to get to the bottom line. So, IMO, I wouldn't put my contact info at the bottom, I would give myself another chance to regain their attentions. I like what you have about service you can trust, I would make that my bottom line. Example:

PHONE: 555-1234
email: aaddafda@dkalfadk
Contact us for a FREE estimate and service you can TRUST

These are just my opinions, and I think that is what you were asking for. But keep working at it, it is getting better everytime.

[sheshovel]

I say it is just fine..it's just a flyer that most people trash within the 1st several seconds of touching it anyway

[GreenClips]

How about this?

[daveintoledo]

that looks so much better..:)

nothing wrong with it, i would still make my services bigger, and the contact info bigger, but ill bet you do just fine with it as it is...

[clallen03]

Not bad at all. I didn't think just removing that thing from around your name would make your flyer look that much better. I like the catch phrase, but I would bold it to make sure they read it. Other then that, I think you have done a great job. I would call you for an estimate.

[2-Cycle Mix Stix]

Green Clips.

There is a trend and not that you have to follow it but, you might want to think about displaying your phone number like this.

319.365.8113

I think it just looks cleaner and flows better.

TwoCycleMixed.

[gramps]

Green Clips.

There is a trend and not that you have to follow it but, you might want to think about displaying your phone number like this.

319.365.8113

I think it just looks cleaner and flows better.

TwoCycleMixed.
Looks like an isp number;)

[befnme]

as far as fall cleanups go , dont you have a blower ? if you do and you use it the old fogies will catch you on it . when you say raking and the oldies want raking only and no noise you cant use a bnlower .

[JKOOPERS]

Green Clips.

There is a trend and not that you have to follow it but, you might want to think about displaying your phone number like this.

319.365.8113

I think it just looks cleaner and flows better.

TwoCycleMixed.

i had some post cardss made 2 yeears ago and thats what they did on mine too.

[Grn Mtn]

Tim or Matt, couple thoughts for you to think about.

Try to avoid using multiple type face, style change and justification. It just clutters it up. Remember clean and simple, clean and simple.
Because you don't offer fert/pest control maybe drop the 'services' from your business name.
Leave the list of what you do off, it is expected that a company will mow/trim and blow. Save the fall clean-up ad for the fall.
De-emphasize your names.
I'm interested in why you have your "logo" warped? It is not enough by itself. With todays software its real tempting to click a button and start adding effects, unfortunately its easy to get carried away. The warping is fine but you need to add another element that explains why the text is warped IE subliminally representing bushes around a pond etc.
Get a real email address, Yahoo and Hotmail are considered anonymous and tend to bounce back unknown mail.
The Toro graphic is adding color, which as mentioned before increases costs, make sure its yours and not a cut and paste. Some people like the WB's because of the lighter weight they tend not to rut as much.

Sorry to "bash" your work, but if you want better paying customers, you need to be at their level. ........Clean and simple....