View Full Version : New flyer... what do you think?
03-01-2006, 09:42 PM
03-01-2006, 09:47 PM
I dont know if i would use the term Now excepting new accounts but other than that it looks awesome. Good luck
03-01-2006, 09:56 PM
Looks very professional.
03-01-2006, 10:19 PM
You might want to use a different headline that lets the reader know right away that you are more than just a guy with a lawnmower.
You sound very professional so, you might want to use "Relax and leave your property to us" (Not sure I really like that, but something that conveys everything you offer, not just lawns.)
Other than that, you did a great job.
03-01-2006, 10:20 PM
I think it looks nice.......
but I also feel it is too wordy. Is this a 8.5x1 sheet of paper, doorhanger, what? I would try and limit the words a little more, otherwise it looks really nice, professional, quality.
03-31-2006, 06:48 PM
I agree with above post and recommend a book called The Non-Designers Design Book, by Robin Williams. It's all about layout, just a great book.
03-31-2006, 07:42 PM
Looks really good!
03-31-2006, 09:19 PM
Looks good man!
03-31-2006, 11:02 PM
I think it looks great. I like the comment the Elite Impressions made, also. Also, I would definitely not say "we are currently accepting new accounts". Other than that,...sorry...I just think it looks great. You just used typical clipart for your pictures, but you made such good use of them. Very good choice of pics for this particular flyer. I really like the logo as well. Very nice.
B&D Lawn Care
04-01-2006, 01:09 AM
Looks good from where I am sitting.
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