New Flyer... let me know what you think!

[CMLawnServices]

This is the inside of the "tri fold" flier. The picture of the guy will be replaced with a picture of myself as soon as i download one. I figure it makes it very personable in a small community.

[mark05]

:clapping: Very Nice!!!!!!!let us know how you do with it

[mark05]

:clapping: Very Nice!!!!!!!let us know how you do with it. hope it dose well

[Freddy_Kruger]

A very nice start but some bad english, "I have very satisfied customers". It doesn't sound professional but it should work.

Go here and read -http://ourworld.compuserve.com/homepages/kuraoka/flyer.htm

[dsmrolla06]

Do you plan on printing these yourself? If i were you, i would just keep it to black and white, itll save you alot of money in the long run. I think you should probly change some of the wording and make some kind of offer and a call to action. Putting in sense of urgency will help generate more calls, maybe a limited time offer. Not to be rude, but rather some constructive criticism, i think you need to redo the whole thing. If i was at the office i would post mine, but im not, so maybe tomorrow. Google some stuff on advertising to get some ideas, and even stuff on word power, that should get you off to a good start.

[nt1]

A very nice start but some bad english, "I have very satisfied customers". It doesn't sound professional but it should work.

Go here and read -http://ourworld.compuserve.com/homepages/kuraoka/flyer.htm

There are some good tips in that article.

[hotpan]

IS that YOU in the picture?? if so, man you look old to just graduated highschool. I'm sorry, because it looked like you tried so hard on the flyer but i think it is WAY to much information. To be honest i couldnt even finish reading it. Simplicity is the key in my opinion, but who says my opinion counts, im new in the business too!

[CMLawnServices]

NO the picture is not of myself, lol i will have to download one soon. This flyer is made to try and stand out from "big guy" lawn care companies. Any advice on changes or things you like? I will be sending the first out soon, i already picked up 4 accounts by handing them out to the neighborhood behind me. Things are going well so far, this is the first round of flyer's, probably a series of 2 more in a couple weeks and possibly a nice follow up call. Thanks!

Chris Markowski

[KC Hartman]

Go here and read -http://ourworld.compuserve.com/homep...aoka/flyer.htm


That Link that Freddy gave is a good solid read. I recommend you take the time to look it over. I copy an pasted it to a word document for future reference. Can't ever have too much knowledge on how to continually improve!

[CMLawnServices]

Acouple changes on the references part. Take a look. Thanks for all the help and that site.

[The landscaper]

How is this going to be a trifold ad? When you open it, does this take up the whole inside? How does your front page look?

[Joey bag a' donuts]

I like it, trying different things is what promoting yourself is all about and yours is quite different than most ive seen on here...all the color could get expensive but otherwise try it out and see how it does.

[BALSECA LANDSCAPING]

If I May Be Honest......it Looks More Like A Resume Than A Flyer.

It Needs To Be Less About Your Self And More About What You Are Going To Do For The Customer. Don't Take This Wrong.

[mad_wrestler]

I agree with most. Make it short and sweet. You are gonna have about a glimpse woth of time and you want to grab thier attention in that glimpse. Use the KISS method!

[Runner]

Clean up the word "phone". The n and the e are too far apart. I'm not sure if that is a typo, or a typeset error. Other than that, it looks good.