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rodbite
03-15-2006, 08:35 PM
What do you think?

I am starting over with nothing. This is after declaring bankruptcy and liquidating assets. In the future I want white trucks with Orange Lettering and Orange Trailers.


Rod

Orange Landscape Management

OutdoorExtras
03-15-2006, 08:39 PM
I really like it, but maybe try using a border around the orange graphic. I know the orange is the "O", but it may be mistaken for "Range".

rodbite
03-15-2006, 08:56 PM
How's this? I was also thinking the orange was to big.

Rod

howardsells2000
03-15-2006, 09:21 PM
I like the big orange. I think if you add a border like "OutdoorExtras" suggested that would be perfect.

rodbite
03-15-2006, 09:54 PM
How about now?

OutdoorExtras
03-15-2006, 10:08 PM
Actually I was suggesting putting a border around just the orange. Kind of like an "O" but with the orange inside of it. The only reason I mentioned it is because when I first looked at it (for a second) I thought your business name was "Range Property Management". I know I'm dumb, but so are a lot of potential customers.:)

Freddy_Kruger
03-15-2006, 10:51 PM
That's a Grape Fruit, no wonder you went bankrupt.

rodbite
03-15-2006, 10:55 PM
Your an idiot!



I lost my business because my son was in the hospital for four months and i spent every second i could with him.

southernlandscapespecial
03-15-2006, 10:58 PM
I like the idea of the orange for the O, but I think most folks will call it
(range). Maybe spell orange out and add pictures of small oranges around the corners or something.....or maybe like my logo and and use the picture of the orange in the middle

Freddy_Kruger
03-15-2006, 10:58 PM
Sounds like your lazy as well as temperMENTAL.

rodbite
03-15-2006, 11:26 PM
You are correct. Most people with take the name as "range" What do you guys think of this

southernlandscapespecial
03-15-2006, 11:28 PM
Rod, that is much better, I really like that one and it looks very professional

rodbite
03-15-2006, 11:31 PM
Or this one. I like this one. Tried the writing curved around the orange. But that looked bad.

Freddy_Kruger
03-15-2006, 11:37 PM
IT looks nice (if a bit pixelated) but I'm thinking Orange Juice. Minute Maid, it looks like a minute maid label.

But if Apple computers can do it, so can you. What's that called again, branding?

G.M.Landscaping
03-15-2006, 11:37 PM
The last one is the best so far. What kind of program do you have to design these?

rodbite
03-15-2006, 11:38 PM
I am using photoshop. It's the only design program i know how to use.

The Yard Barber, Inc.
03-15-2006, 11:45 PM
I like the second one with the smaller orange. maybe a darker shadow around the orange.

Frosty03
03-16-2006, 06:16 AM
My first post here.

Nice logo, but still needs tweaking IMHO. I agree, I first thought it was range landscape management.

You never have a second chance to make a FIRST impression. I am not an artist, but I have a keen eye for detail. I guess it has stemmed from 11 years in pest control and another 10 in inspections.

Try this and see how it looks. Remember, things look well in sets of three. meaning three lines, or three words and dividing items up using three as the dividing number.

Get the words "landscape management off of the orange and place them right below the orange side by side, not one on top of the other. The words are spilling off of the orange and it looks unbalanced a bit. Still a lot better than the first one.

Then move the word Orange 2/3 down the actual orange itself. You are dividing the orange in three and putting the word orange in the lower 1/3. Then directly under that put Landscape Management...left to right.

Be sure that Landscape Management does not touch the picture of the orange. Even if you have to put a space between:
Landscape______Management.

See how it looks, you may not like it, but it's worth a try.

Frosty03

Runner
03-16-2006, 08:12 AM
Just be careful moving the other two words off of the Orange. They may then look out of place, or "added on". I WOULD like to say though, I DO like the way you have the way Orange written at an angle like that. It just seems suitable for that. I also like the fonts for that. Both types go together real well.