View Full Version : Spring Flyer. Whatcha think?

Picture Perfect Landscape
01-17-2007, 07:25 PM
Criticism Welcome

01-17-2007, 07:59 PM
Does anyone have tips on how to get commercial business for lawncutting?

01-17-2007, 08:01 PM
You need a different background pick it is way to busy. It makes it very hard to read. Overall the content is good, I would probably leave out the maintenance contract part and explain it when you give the bid.

Picture Perfect Landscape
01-17-2007, 08:06 PM
Flyer for a Tree Company I sell for a little. Still waiting on there logo and such to finish.

01-20-2007, 08:54 PM
yeah man it's hard to read because of the bright background, now the second one is much easier and calming on the eye.

01-20-2007, 09:22 PM
I would group your services into 2 or 3 smaller categories like: Maintenance.....Landscaping.....Hardscaping or whatever. It would be easier for a prospective client to find a particular service they may be interested in. I also agree with the background.


J&R Landscaping
01-20-2007, 09:44 PM
I agree, the background on the first flyer needs to be changed. The second one looks great.

01-21-2007, 12:48 AM
I would also remove the "SEVICES FOR 2007" part....Did you not offer that befor???....and do you plane to change it for every year????