I need feedback on my postcard/door hanger!

[Larson Lawn Care]

I need feedback so I can change what needs to be changed. I put "*other services available upon request" because I will be sub contracting other serices. I will also be changing the 5% to 10%.

[Wells]

Looks good other then you have a lot of open space on the postcard.
I would suggest increasing the font size on the services section, phone number and website to help fill in some of the open space.
I would also suggest removing the word "soon" from the free estimate, it just doesn't fit the sentance.

[LonniesLawns]

no statemnt to make me want to pick you --- Why would I pick you over someone else? Because you are cheap?

[dKoester]

The 5 % discount doesn't sound right. If you were a customer would that jump out at you, I doubt it. Go with 10% or do a combination of services discount. The Please call us soon sounds like you are begging for their business. Just put on the card Call today for a free esimate.

[Larson Lawn Care]

-Everything in white lettering I will be making larger/bolder.
-I may say something like: Serving ___ and ___ areas!
-and I will be thinking of something to say to make people want to choose us...if you have any ideas, throw them at me!

[LonniesLawns]

first answer the question -- why should they hire you?