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terrapro
03-06-2007, 03:33 PM
heres two i just threw together. which one is best or any suggestions too. thanks

Grn Mtn
03-06-2007, 03:47 PM
of the two the top is better but neither really grabs my attention.

a ":" is needed after services, and a "-" is needed after semi(-monthly).
be careful about saying you put down organic fert, in NY you need a license to apply even some organic ferts.

toac
03-06-2007, 04:18 PM
as stated above...nothing really grabs my attention. i think you would be better off without the graphic. it doesn't really do anything for the flyer.

Grn Mtn
03-06-2007, 04:27 PM
better yet, just say "multiple billing choices"...

terrapro
03-06-2007, 04:48 PM
fert is legal to spread in MI. semimonthly is spelled correctly look it up. i have taken note of the colon. thanks for the suggestions

so the graphics dont help fill the space and introduce the services. any suggestions

MOOSE
03-06-2007, 07:14 PM
You should've been working on this a few weeks ago.

Went out today to give an estimate and one of my clients had 3 flyers on there mailbox.

Matts Lawns
03-06-2007, 07:18 PM
The top one, I guess. I would atleast print this on colored paper if you can't get some color in there another way.

terrapro
03-06-2007, 09:31 PM
The top one, I guess. I would atleast print this on colored paper if you can't get some color in there another way.

yeah i was thinking green. i can get $.07 copies on colored paper at staples. from the people ive shown these to its pretty much 50/50 so i might do 250 of each

on paper everyone seems to like the 2nd one. ill just try both

thanks for the replies

Runner
03-06-2007, 11:04 PM
I would use a hyphen in Semi-monthly. Also, on the first one, move the Or Weekly Maintenance over one space to the right. the left margin alignment is off, otherwise. Other than that, that'll work!

Precise
03-08-2007, 02:27 PM
its going to be hard to get calls without the whole phone number lol

NewHorizon's Land
03-08-2007, 03:19 PM
I like the second one. I would change semimonthly to bi-weekly(grammar). JMO. ANd yes do color but only do one color of paper. It looks more professional.