my aeration flyer

[grass disaster]

am i even on the right track?

is this too much information??

any help would be great

[causalitist]

am i even on the right track?

is this too much information??

any help would be great

looks good, love the picture, customers love to see exactly why they should pay you. you misspelled dethatching and i doubt your called grass masrter

[grass disaster]

looks good, love the picture, customers love to see exactly why they should pay you. you misspelled dethatching and i doubt your called grass masrter


how is dethatching suposed to be spelled. i think it's right


yes it's a rough draft

[Uranus]

how is dethatching suposed to be spelled. i think it's right


yes it's a rough draft

You forgot the H in the flier. Looks good. Correct you spelling and send them out.

[grass disaster]

You forgot the H in the flier. Looks good. Correct you spelling and send them out.

YUP thanks i would have probably missed that one in the final draft.

[screensnot]

Did you misspell the name of your company (Grass Masrter)?

[fiveoboy01]

I like it. Diagram is good.

You should change the color so that those two lines of text are the same shade of green.

[screensnot]

Take the first "and" out of "Reduces water and runoff and puddling".

[02DURAMAX]

Take the first "and" out of "Reduces water and runoff and puddling".

yea i agree....other than that it looks good.

[grass disaster]

now i just have to figure out how to get these to the people.

i would like to go door to door but i'm how sure how i would place them on the door.

where do most of you people put them?

[grass disaster]

here is an updated draft

[grass disaster]

now all i need to do is buy a $4k plugr and i'll be all set.

[Runner]

Who uses the words "weed killer"?

[grass disaster]

Who uses the words "weed killer"?

is the work killer too aggressive

[TurfProSTL]

^ Try "control". You're licensed, right?

Is "Plowing" for snow or gardens?

[grass disaster]

^ Try "control". You're licensed, right?

Is "Plowing" for snow or gardens?


no i don't have a license. i sub it out.

concidering plowing is on the same line as garden. i don't think snow plowing a garden would be a good service to offer.

[TurfProSTL]

no i don't have a license. i sub it out.Ah, hence the killer mentality.....

concidering plowing is on the same line as garden. i don't think snow plowing a garden would be a good service to offer.Well, YOU know what you meant. That's the important thing. :laugh:

Good luck. The layout looks fine. I'd be inclined to use spell-check and put other's input to good use before I go distributing a thousand or so flyers. But that's me.

[grass disaster]

Ah, hence the killer mentality.....

Well, YOU know what you meant. That's the important thing. :laugh:

Good luck. The layout looks fine. I'd be inclined to use spell-check and put other's input to good use before I go distributing a thousand or so flyers. But that's me.

maybe i will switch it to say garden plowing / tilling

[Rob.C]

Looks good, I use similar diagrams on my website, but aeration does a lot more than your diagram shows, your missing (2) steps.....but its always good to have a diagram.

[weeble67]

I think the flyer looks great, good luck with the
customers. You'll have to let us know what method
of dispersal you used and the outcome of it.

[Runner]

Also, you may want to check with you state laws. Here in Michigan, that flyer would not be legal - considering the weed control issue. In many states, you can not even hold yourself to the public as providing such a service. When you advertise in any way, shape, or form, that you provide these services, this is what is meant by this clause.