View Full Version : honest opinions on this ad
03-14-2008, 10:25 PM
THIS IS A POTENTIAL NEWSPAPER AD AND/OR HALF SHEET FLYER.
give me your honest opinions on this ad/flyer please!
03-14-2008, 10:29 PM
Honestly it is pretty good I take it is going in newspaper correct. I would change the 50 percent to the first mowing with a acceptance of a season contract or agreement. My opinion.
03-14-2008, 10:33 PM
thanks walker, the problem is i don't do contracts so i figured adding "new customers" to the coupon would make it sound better. This ad would be going in a newspaper and/or would be a half sheet flyer on colored paper.
any other opinions?
03-14-2008, 10:36 PM
Just....I would put my phone # in stead of phone numbers go here
03-15-2008, 10:58 AM
Do you maintain landscapes as well? I think I would replace "lawn maintenance" with "landscape maintenance" if so. You already have lawn mowing as your first bullet,which you might switch to "complete lawn care"
Just my opinion
03-15-2008, 11:07 AM
Maybe this will help
03-15-2008, 03:30 PM
thanks eco star for your changes on my ad. They do make it look better and more professional.
03-16-2008, 12:11 AM
after thinking about the changes ecostar made for my ad, i decided that i will use them in my ad. these changes make me look a heck of alot more professional, while the old one basically said "HI my name is JOE BLOW and I want to mow your lawn" lol I might change one other thing, but thanks for the advice!
03-16-2008, 12:40 AM
The one ecostar posted is a lot better.
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