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Scagmower48
03-14-2008, 10:25 PM
THIS IS A POTENTIAL NEWSPAPER AD AND/OR HALF SHEET FLYER.

give me your honest opinions on this ad/flyer please!

WALKER LANDSCAPE
03-14-2008, 10:29 PM
Honestly it is pretty good I take it is going in newspaper correct. I would change the 50 percent to the first mowing with a acceptance of a season contract or agreement. My opinion.

Scagmower48
03-14-2008, 10:33 PM
thanks walker, the problem is i don't do contracts so i figured adding "new customers" to the coupon would make it sound better. This ad would be going in a newspaper and/or would be a half sheet flyer on colored paper.

any other opinions?

Supper Grassy
03-14-2008, 10:36 PM
Looks good.

Just....I would put my phone # in stead of phone numbers go here

EcoStar
03-15-2008, 10:58 AM
Do you maintain landscapes as well? I think I would replace "lawn maintenance" with "landscape maintenance" if so. You already have lawn mowing as your first bullet,which you might switch to "complete lawn care"

Just my opinion
Daniel

EcoStar
03-15-2008, 11:07 AM
Maybe this will help
Good luck
Daniel

Scagmower48
03-15-2008, 03:30 PM
thanks eco star for your changes on my ad. They do make it look better and more professional.

Scagmower48
03-16-2008, 12:11 AM
after thinking about the changes ecostar made for my ad, i decided that i will use them in my ad. these changes make me look a heck of alot more professional, while the old one basically said "HI my name is JOE BLOW and I want to mow your lawn" lol I might change one other thing, but thanks for the advice!

Mark Bogart
03-16-2008, 12:40 AM
The one ecostar posted is a lot better.