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TIMELESS
04-08-2008, 01:38 PM
which do you guys think is better to send out?
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<a href="http://s64.photobucket.com/albums/h168/cipher213/?action=view&amp;current=030401-flyer.jpg" target="_blank" rel="nofollow"><img src="http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h168/cipher213/030401-flyer.jpg" border="0"></a>
<a href="http://s72.photobucket.com/albums/i165/time1ess/?action=view&current=green.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i165/time1ess/green.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

kleankutslawn
04-08-2008, 03:44 PM
there is no link posted buddy

TIMELESS
04-08-2008, 04:09 PM
sorry lemme try again

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h168/cipher213/030401-flyer.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i165/time1ess/green.jpg

A to Z lawn care
04-08-2008, 06:34 PM
sorry lemme try again

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h168/cipher213/030401-flyer.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i165/time1ess/green.jpg

hmmmmmmmmm i would say the first one it pops out at you more and apppeals to the reader

IN2MOWN
04-08-2008, 06:45 PM
Id go #1...

capetan
04-08-2008, 07:36 PM
wow did you design that yourself, pretty creative, i like number 1, but add a little more content, the design is really good

Techmow
04-08-2008, 09:35 PM
I like number 1 best. You might want to add some benefit to going with you, or some educational section.

TIMELESS
04-09-2008, 05:16 PM
thanks...this is the one i think im gonna use...how do i separate myself from the rest? what could i add as a benefit to the customer?

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i165/time1ess/flyer.jpg

Lynden-Jeff
04-09-2008, 08:45 PM
A green experience survives, what on earth does that mean.

racer56
04-09-2008, 09:29 PM
The leaf you added costs roughly 5 times more to print now. I don't think I would spend the money that direction, I would spend that money on more flyers. I own a print shop and can tell you reguardless of what others will tell you the 4 color process work done on the flyers we sent out just didn't work. We got WAY better responce on a single color on white or black ink on a astrobright (neon) stock.
I have been thinking we should move into helping our lawn companies market themselves properly. We have sold out of the biz but still want to be around it somehow. My shoulder has just told me that is enough.

Techmow
04-10-2008, 09:36 AM
thanks...this is the one i think im gonna use...how do i separate myself from the rest? what could i add as a benefit to the customer?

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i165/time1ess/flyer.jpg

I could be anything. It doesn't even need to be different than what your competitors do, as long as they're not advertising it as a benefit.
Flexible billing - Our customers receive daily progress reports - We guaranty our work - We are on time, every time - We refresh our equipment every three years, we don't let out dated equipment affect the quality of our jobs - etc.
It only needs to sound like a benefit. It does, however, need to be true.

Another option is to tell the customer how to do something.
It's time to start seasonal fertilizing. Make sure you don't over fertilize your lawn. You should use a good quality, calibrated spreader to make sure that it's done correctly. And don't forget to sweep up any fertilizer that gets on your driveway, walkways, and the public road.
Call today to set up a seasonal fertilizer program.

Otherwise, it looks like most any flier I've seen in most industry's. The majority just put a bulleted list of their basic services.:nono:

I really like the general look of your flier.

kyle39
04-10-2008, 10:26 AM
#1. Looks good catchy. I would always stress services... over your name.:weightlifter:

MJS
04-10-2008, 10:32 AM
I'd go with #1 - the other one just isn't as catchy to me.