Post Card Proof

[yard_smart]

Hey guys what do you think? Personally I like the lay out but i think it needs a better call to action! or some type of promotion . .. Help me out fellas

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k101/dccowboy32/4x6postcardfront2.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k101/dccowboy32/4x6postcardbackcopy.jpg

[JDiepstra]

Too! Many! Exclamation! Marks! !!!!!!!!!! Looks good otherwise.

[twanked~ls]

yeah i would take the ! marks off the two sentences at the bottom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

it looks real good and a nice one liner. BAILOUT hahaha

[Albery's Lawn & Tractor]

No where to put the addresses.

[yard_smart]

Mailing label goes on the bakc where the grass is

[Kate Butler]

Tell me the difference between a shrub and a bush, please. In my experience, they are the same thing - although 'shrub' is (by far) the more professional term.

I hope you aren't using both words because some of your potential client base doesn't know what a 'shrub' is.

[yard_smart]

some of your potential client base doesn't know what a 'shrub' is.

thats why i use both :)

[IN2MOWN]

Tell me the difference between a shrub and a bush, please. In my experience, they are the same thing - although 'shrub' is (by far) the more professional term.

I hope you aren't using both words because some of your potential client base doesn't know what a 'shrub' is.



Shrub: a low usually several-stemmed woody plant


Bush: a low densely branched shrub

[LushGreenLawn]

Mailing label goes on the bakc where the grass is

The post office will more than likely kick it back. The spot for the address has to be blank, I forget how large, but it is a specified size. I would check with your local postmaster. Better safe than sorry.

[s helping hand g]

that sucks man start over...

[Steve B]

I love the front. But, I don't see any call to action at all.

The other thing I'm thinking is that the lawn you are showing does not need a bail out. Maybe a before and after picture would work better with that verbage.