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Mortymower
02-06-2009, 04:06 PM
I dont know how to post the actual card because I made it in the gotprint.com designer so here is the link to it, there is a tab to click to see the back. Its a combo of gotprint and paint. Let me know what I should change/add/remove. Thanks!

https://gotprint.net/g/loadFlashDesign.do?rec=1&src=shoppingCart&action=POPULATE&rn=1233949954994

jg244888
02-06-2009, 04:32 PM
it doesn't work!

Mortymower
02-06-2009, 04:35 PM
Link doesn't work so I figured out how to take a screen shot, here is a link to the thread with the card in it.


http://www.lawnsite.com/showthread.php?t=260619

Toy2
02-06-2009, 04:41 PM
Two free what? I would make it clear...that way your not cleaning gutters on a three story house twice a year for free.......LOL!!!

I like the rest..

DLAWNS
02-08-2009, 11:52 AM
I would also say to clear up the two free services, besides that looks good to me.

Scagg Mann
02-09-2009, 11:13 PM
Why offer something for referring a friend when this potential customer has not even hired you yet. Would you refer a electrician before he worked for you? It would go something like this; hey john I got this flyer from this lawn company, I get $25.00 off my bill if you sign up with him. (john) How long have you used this company (you) well, well, I don't yet,........ Just something to think about. A lot of people put this on postcards and flyers. Besides that it is good and the bright color really stands out. Good luck this year.