View Full Version : new flyer tell me what you think!

04-07-2009, 08:35 PM
new flyer for this season tell me what you think...

04-07-2009, 09:09 PM
That's an interesting concept. However I like it.

04-07-2009, 09:11 PM
Use my company because your scared?

04-07-2009, 09:14 PM
That looks great! Blade of grass is ripped. You need a ? after the did you know blurp.

04-07-2009, 09:17 PM
nothing like using Fear....just like the Gubberment....

Might work?!

It does look good overall.


04-07-2009, 09:19 PM
Yeah dude...srry..it does LOOK good.

04-08-2009, 12:28 AM
That's an interesting concept. Like someone else mentioned, you need a ? at the end of the headline. And maybe add a little bit about why thieves target bad landscapes. I guess overgrown shrubs are easy to hide in.

04-08-2009, 07:22 AM
i9 hate it because of the bungler

04-08-2009, 11:14 AM
I have done several large and major trim jobs and a few re-landscapes due to the fact of stuff being way overgrown. Some elderly folks are afraid of prowlers hiding in their shrubery. I'm just not sure if I would advertise that fact.

Edmonds Lawn Service
04-08-2009, 11:30 AM
Looks great. Good idea.

04-08-2009, 12:17 PM
+1 point for the fear mongering

04-08-2009, 02:55 PM
I would never use it but if it works for you then it is great. It doen't say you offer hedge trimming or prunning or any type of landscape work, so how does grass attract a crime?? I can see over grown bushes being a saftey issue but you dont trim according to your flyer. BUT any way I wish everyone best luck I want evrbody to be happy and sucessful in life

04-08-2009, 04:06 PM
Now thats an interesting concept.

04-08-2009, 07:31 PM
I like it, I think it is a pretty cool concept. I would add some info on how it would attract burglers though.

04-09-2009, 12:38 AM
Everybody is so nice here. I will go ahead and say that it is gay. Who are you marketing to? Completely unkept yards.

04-09-2009, 08:49 AM
well gay or not its gotten me customers so im happy with it.

jay albers
04-09-2009, 09:05 AM
hey man i like it! way to think outside the box!

04-09-2009, 05:47 PM
I think the idea is good, I would mention hedge pruning and re landscaping though. It presents a serious side of the facts of life to an extent, however I don't think it creates fear; I believe that aspect is eliminated with the cartoonish type character. I truly believe this concept should work well, aims the point well.

04-09-2009, 08:06 PM
its interesting but im not ure how much business your going to get from it