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Logan Graham
07-18-2009, 08:09 PM
You may have seen my other thread about my flyer, but this one's about my business card. I tried to keep it clean and simple. I'm 14 and I'm looking to make some money this summer.

Hopefully you like!

http://i29.tinypic.com/ng6jyb.gif

redmax fan
07-18-2009, 08:24 PM
ide change the vertical lines between each service you offer ,
to either these / or these - between each word

THC
07-18-2009, 08:27 PM
I don't like it, it's hard to read and you don't need to make all the letters so large.

LouisianaLawnboy
07-18-2009, 08:32 PM
It looks like it says "I mowing"
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redmax fan
07-18-2009, 08:35 PM
or maybe between each service use these ~ in green

TomberLawn
07-18-2009, 08:41 PM
I agree, the | between each service is a little confusing to look at. Some other symbol will look better. There is a lot of white space on either side of your phone number/Call block. A simple graphic like some grass or something related would fill it in and give a person a general idea of what you do even before reading the card. Make sure your phone number is large enough to be read on a card that's 2x3.25". It looks big here, but your image is about 10x bigger than an actual card would be. I would take out the "Call Logan!" line and make you phone number bigger, and maybe make the "Call for FREE estimate" a little bigger as well.

Small, simple changes. You've got a great start.

kregan
07-18-2009, 08:57 PM
Looks good but I would tweak it a little...

I would:

1) reduce the font size of the & between lawn and garden.
2) replace | with a bullet round or diamond.
3) replace "call Logan" with just "call"
4) replace "call for free estimates" with "free estimates"

redmax fan
07-18-2009, 09:04 PM
for me i like the personal touch of ' call logan ' ,
makes me feel like im talking to the person in
charge so we can get everything crystal clear

topsites
07-18-2009, 10:52 PM
Actually?

You can shorten all that to:
Logan's lawn & garden
Call Today for Free Estimates!
(123)456-7890

Oh... I think your phone will ring :laugh:

Runner
07-19-2009, 12:59 AM
What Topsites just said is the perfect post. I would like to add to that for example; "yardwork". You list all these things...to say yardwork at the end is redundant.
That's like saying we do dusting, vacuuming, wash walls, do windows, and and clean the bathroom and kitchen. Oh yeah,...we also do housework.
Not to mention, we don't use the term "yard" in any professional term, anyway. I can elaborate a little more on that if you wish or need.

93Chevy
07-19-2009, 09:52 AM
It needs a graphic, in my opinion. I also don't like the font, looks too...what's the word...homemade...maybe.

I do like the color scheme, however.

redmax fan
07-19-2009, 10:09 AM
i for one like the services listed as alot of people wouldnt think someones offering the services of weeding and watering a garden

dwight1moore
07-19-2009, 12:10 PM
only thing i dont like is the I I I I's btwn the words

Stillwater
07-19-2009, 12:12 PM
That business card is to in your FACE...read topsites post