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brain
09-06-2009, 01:27 PM
Just wanted to get some input on my business cards before i send them to print. Tell me what you think!

a clear difference lawn
09-06-2009, 04:11 PM
I think your company name is awesome!! One of the more creative ones I've heard on here!! The business card is great as well. The one suggestion I would offer is to make the phone number a different color. There is an awful lot of green plus it would make your number stand out. Otherwise - I think it is fantastic. Good luck to you!

brain
09-06-2009, 04:38 PM
Thanks for the input!!! Ok, here is revision 1.

LouisianaLawnboy
09-06-2009, 04:40 PM
The font makes it looks childish.
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THC
09-06-2009, 06:12 PM
I hate that garden gnome. Have you ever played half life 2 and tried the achievement with that thing?

Smithco Lawncare
09-06-2009, 06:15 PM
Thanks for the input!!! Ok, here is revision 1.

Im red green color blind. A lot of people are. Dont know if that color combo would work. I had to ask someone what the difference was.

ed2hess
09-06-2009, 06:57 PM
Okay but would work best if you are putting up Christmas lights.

THC
09-06-2009, 07:44 PM
Okay but would work best if you are putting up Christmas lights.

and instead of a gnome, a pic of Santa.

ed2hess
09-06-2009, 10:20 PM
Best go back to the drawing board and get a new name of the business if it isn't too late. Is that some kind of up north common little fellow:confused: I mean the gnome?

brain
09-06-2009, 10:43 PM
No one watches your lawn grow, like a garden gnome does!

shepoutside
09-06-2009, 10:51 PM
I like it, and it is catchy, and something people will remember. I like the 1st version better, not liking the brown. Good Luck!!

fishfacejr2
09-07-2009, 05:15 PM
i love the name... and the card!

mowerbrad
09-07-2009, 07:28 PM
I like the name, I don't care what anyone else says. The name is creative and it is something that I haven't heard of before.

STIHL GUY
09-07-2009, 10:04 PM
looks pretty good. i like the name

blaiselfd5
09-08-2009, 12:21 AM
i love it as well...........i was thinking because your gnome is a little cartoonish, maybe changing your font to something more professional.........either way i think its great.

Kennedy Landscaping
09-08-2009, 03:54 PM
I like it.

BeSeenGraphics
09-08-2009, 04:23 PM
How do you plan on printing these? The name is catchy. The toon looks like Santa. The font is not professional. Maybe just use that font for the actual business name and go with an Arial Black for the rest?

jada86
09-09-2009, 06:41 AM
I say ditch the red entirely. Try putting all the lettering in black and phone no. in green or vice versa. Try it both ways. You already have a lot of color in your gnome. Also, just to dress it up a bit, try adding a black single line border, it might make it stand out a bit. Also, when you say trimming, what do you trim? Lawns, trees, shrubs?

SLMGT
09-10-2009, 11:32 PM
I personally don't get the gnome. I would rather see a very professional looking card than a catchy somewhat comic card. I guess it really depends on the image you want for your company. It's really difference strokes for different folks. Know the clients you are wanting to attract and go with a name and card that speaks to those clients.

THEGOLDPRO
09-10-2009, 11:46 PM
def original

unkownfl
09-11-2009, 12:47 AM
Change the Gnome's clothes to maybe something more Bavarian rather then north pole.

brain
09-12-2009, 02:58 PM
Thanks for all the tips and advice. Finally decided on the final and just got done with my order. Just thought I'd post it to show how it's changed. Thanks again!!!

gogreenmaureen
09-20-2009, 04:52 PM
I can't believe some don't know what a garden gnome is. I've had one in my woodland garden for years. I love your business card. Good Luck to you.