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growearth
12-31-2009, 04:07 PM
FRONT OF THE FLIER

http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w87/sherudosaj/2009/flyer.jpg?t=1262289928


BACK OF THE FLIER


http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w87/sherudosaj/2009/BACKCOPY.jpg?t=1262289855



Any comments will be welcome - We hope everyone has a wonderful 2010 - thank you for a response

Chilehead
12-31-2009, 04:14 PM
I like everything about it except the font (looks like Arial Black to me). You may want to try using Century Gothic, Return To Earth, or Garamond. Experiment with layouts using BOLD, ITALICS, & UNDERLINE. The photographs are superbe for your ad. Looks sharp!

White Gardens
01-02-2010, 02:19 PM
I like everything about it except the font (looks like Arial Black to me). You may want to try using Century Gothic, Return To Earth, or Garamond. Experiment with layouts using BOLD, ITALICS, & UNDERLINE. The photographs are superbe for your ad. Looks sharp!

Same here, change the font. I would try to use a cleaner font and/or eliminate some of the wording to clean it up. You don't want someone to glance at it, not read it through and throw it away. You want to get your point across as quickly as possible.

tadpole
01-02-2010, 04:47 PM
Same here. A different Font would help. Also try a pale color background, Entirely too mich white in an ad for a business that deals with color.

Smallaxe
01-03-2010, 09:59 AM
Do a spell check. "Maintenance"

It took me a little time to figure out what, 'yard mulch' was, and why $45, is a good price. No spaces surrounding the, " / " sign. :)

Isobel
01-03-2010, 11:13 AM
I'd spell check it.

also that first line reads kinda of strange. which is it suppose to be:
"We are your neighbors. Lawn Care Specialists."
or
"We are your neighbor's lawn care specialists" (implies a single neighbor's lawn service company)
or
"We are your neighbors' lawn care specialists" (implies everyone's lawn service company)

White Gardens
01-03-2010, 01:18 PM
The one thing I want to add is I don't like the "instant" estimates on fliers. You could take a quick look at a place and write down some numbers, but you might not see a few things, or an extra lot connected to a property, etc..

If you keep the estimating on your fliers, you need to put a disclaimer in there to make sure that isn't the price that someone is going to make you stick too.

echeandia
01-15-2010, 11:27 PM
What does your "Landscape" estimate include? Get rid of it. It is confusing. Also, are you giving away 3 basic fert apps? Because that is what it looks like.

pararest
01-22-2010, 10:17 PM
I like it. Although the many post's make great points. Whatever your flier turns out to be, make sure to test the results. Each year I'm sure you will tweak the flier to continue to get the best results. Keep up the good work:waving:

Micah Owner
Paradise Restored Landscaping
Portland Landscaper (http://www.paradiserestored.com)

rexxxy
01-29-2010, 04:18 AM
nothing is free in this world anymore..are you aware of the tax increase you should be preparing for ?

LouisianaLawnboy
02-10-2010, 04:07 PM
Looks good. I'd follow some of the above comments
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kootoomootoo
02-11-2010, 10:13 PM
wrong font
house on front not representative of your local area
looks like a schoolkid designed it.

are you that broke you cant pay a guy $100 to design it.

Crash
02-12-2010, 01:45 PM
A couple miss spellings and decide whether you're gonna capitalize the first letter of each word or not...you can't switch back and forth, unprofessional.