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petroskie
03-10-2010, 11:57 AM
Here is my new fyler, please leave comments......i can take it.

MIKESHAFFER
03-10-2010, 08:55 PM
background is too busy, and its alittle hard to read because of the background.

LawnoftheMonth
03-10-2010, 09:37 PM
^ this, and where is the after pic of the woods after you created a smooth, clear, usable area? froman needs to be seperated.

best of luck!

Runner
03-10-2010, 11:13 PM
Yeah...I probably would have picked a more open serene setting...something that looks like a park, or something. This would give more of a connotation of what someones prop SHOULD look like.

LouisianaLawnboy
03-10-2010, 11:51 PM
Your background picture is too dark and your font is too small. Bad combination.

Chilehead
03-11-2010, 12:45 AM
I have to agree. Get a new background. The forest may be "rural", but a picture of a farm or mountain-laden horizon may be more appropriate.

LB1234
03-11-2010, 09:35 AM
i would get it and throw it in the trash before I got into the house. WAY WAY to difficult to read. it actually hurts my eyes and I couldn't read most of it.

Sammy
03-12-2010, 01:34 AM
I agree with what everyone else has said.