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richsoucie
10-20-2010, 11:43 PM
so here is my bussiness card what do you guys think? anything i should change?

http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81545&stc=1&d=1287627908

SNAPPER MAN
10-21-2010, 12:18 AM
Take your cell number off. You don't want people calling you at all hours all the days of the week.
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TheGoat
10-21-2010, 12:31 AM
Choose one font and stick with it.

unless you have a storefront, type setup your addy does not need to be on the card

cut it down to one phone number and take either the email or the web addy off

it is too cluttered.

if you must have all that info on there then consider having name and services on the front and contact info on the back.

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 12:34 AM
cell number is on there so people can get ahold of me when im not in the office. also i moved some stuff around new image http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81555&stc=1&d=1287631960

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 12:49 AM
http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81556&stc=1&d=1287632827

killed some things fixed the font and moved some stuff around. back of the card is a referral form

TheGoat
10-21-2010, 02:12 AM
Much better

might want to try a deep shade of green for the text instead of blue, real deep near black

like 22280B in hex color code

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 02:16 AM
alright i have to change that in my logo file so give me a couple minutes i was thinking of changing it anyway since my truck is blue so we will see how it looks

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 02:35 AM
here it is

techgeek
10-21-2010, 02:47 AM
when you're designing something think about how its going to look when printed, because when printed it might be hard to have the shaded part look good. unless your going to have a professional printing

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 02:59 AM
that one the color got messed up this one looks better. i have a $300 kodak photo printer that thing is amazing i think the shading should come out pretty good

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 10:56 AM
final product still trying to aquire .com address
http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81558&stc=1&d=1287669243

TheGoat
10-21-2010, 12:24 PM
nbpm.co is available

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 12:38 PM
changed the font and reworded some stuff

Darryl G
10-21-2010, 01:52 PM
Looks kind of busy to me. I prefer a much more simple card with just contact info on it. It's a card, not an ad. I used to have a list of services on the back of mine, but now it's just company name, my name/title, phone in big bold print, mailing address, lic #. I get so many cards where the most important info on it, the phone number, is so small that I can barely read it. I want people to be able to read mine without having to put their glasses on and unless you're legally blind you can.

bohiaa
10-25-2010, 02:14 AM
Dont spend a ton of money and time on a business card, a Business card is JUST that.

it's a place to say what u do and how to get in touch with you. it's NOT advertisement.