Just finished the website any input?

[rbl525]

I just uploaded my website, any input on what to add or remove?

www.yorklawncareomaha.com (http://www.yorklawncareomaha.com)

Thanks,

Mike

[zmowingmaster]

looks good and straight to the point.

[Tyner Lawn Service]

Looks nice:)

[jjarvis4]

I think the site itself is very informative and easy to navigate. I would suggest in the meta keywords that you take out some of the really general words and add several variations of "Lawncare in Omaha, NE", "Omaha, NE Lawncare Service", etc. This will help people in your area to find you and help your ranking on google. Trying to get ranked high on Google with a key word like mowing will never help your site. Try to make your key words (and phrases) local. Think about what words and phrases you would use to find a lawncare business in your area.

Hope that helps!

Regards,
Joshua

[rbl525]

I think the site itself is very informative and easy to navigate. I would suggest in the meta keywords that you take out some of the really general words and add several variations of "Lawncare in Omaha, NE", "Omaha, NE Lawncare Service", etc. This will help people in your area to find you and help your ranking on google. Trying to get ranked high on Google with a key word like mowing will never help your site. Try to make your key words (and phrases) local. Think about what words and phrases you would use to find a lawncare business in your area.

Hope that helps!

Regards,
Joshua

ok, i will have to figure out how to do that, Thank you for the advice.

[ajslands]

I would suggest to make it green as opposed to pumpkin orange. Also on the contact page, make a forum with a few boxes. Make sure when doing it that they're required fields or you'll get spammers.
You may want to put a copy right at the bottom.
when you write about numbers ina paragraph such as on your commercial page, (1, 2, 3) You should write those out, as it should be (one, two , three) you should do that for any number below fourteen.


When you label a page such as home, it should be underlined as it is a title, but put a little more excitingness into it, like make it bigger. if you want, change the font.
also i think you should take the "neighborhood assoc page out of there, you have a commercial page with close to the exact same services. instead, I think you should add a photos page or a customer testimonial page, AND DO NOT GET TESTIMONIALS OFF OF SOME INTERNET PAGE AS THEY ARE PROBABLY COPYRIGHTED and its plagiarism.

[JFGauvreau]

It's easy to navigate however I don't like the color it self, and the text written vertically are pointless to me.

[rbl525]

I would suggest to make it green as opposed to pumpkin orange. Also on the contact page, make a forum with a few boxes. Make sure when doing it that they're required fields or you'll get spammers.
You may want to put a copy right at the bottom.
when you write about numbers ina paragraph such as on your commercial page, (1, 2, 3) You should write those out, as it should be (one, two , three) you should do that for any number below fourteen.


When you label a page such as home, it should be underlined as it is a title, but put a little more excitingness into it, like make it bigger. if you want, change the font.
also i think you should take the "neighborhood assoc page out of there, you have a commercial page with close to the exact same services. instead, I think you should add a photos page or a customer testimonial page, AND DO NOT GET TESTIMONIALS OFF OF SOME INTERNET PAGE AS THEY ARE PROBABLY COPYRIGHTED and its plagiarism.

ok, fixed the background, the titles, the numbers, and built a form.

I am having some issues getting the form to work though. I have no idea how to make the submit button post it to my email address. here is the form page, it isn't in navigation. If anyone can help on how to do this, it is appreciated. The page with the form is http://www.yorklawncareomaha.com/testcontact.html

I am going to leave the associations for now, but once i get all this ironed out, I am going to roll what I am learning into version two and will consolidate a services section and then a section for each group (commercial, residential, Associations) and how i can cater to them specifically.

Thank you all for your help.

[JFGauvreau]

To make easy forms to your website that customers can contact you, hit submit, and you will received it my mail. Check out www.jotform.com, its free and super easy to use.

[jonthepain]

I would suggest to make it green as opposed to pumpkin orange.

that's the first thing that jumped out at me

[nr7pro]

I scanned thru some suggestions, pretty good, you could add some green,
or just add a landscaping picture on the homepage for starters...

Anyway the big point is....

DUDE! You have 50+ pages, if you actually optimized
for search engines... I mean Google would eat it up!

Most website have 5 - 10 pages, you got a lot of content!
Optimize and take advantage of getting ranked well!