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TeenMMMowing
05-26-2011, 09:46 PM
About Myself
I’m 13 years old and my name is Name Last Name. I’ve been mowing for about a year and I live in your neighborhood.

Prices
Prices in your area are anywhere from $20.00 to $30.00.
Free Estimates!

Extras
Lawn clean up – $5.00 (Trash, Sticks, etc)
Pet Waste Removal - $5.00

Notes
If you want 1 free EXTRA then refer me to a friend or neighbor!
We leave all gates the way we found them

I’ll blow all debris and dust caused by my service off hard surfaces driveways, patios and walks

Name LastName: (000) 000 0000




Yes it does have a title, i just want you guys to help me out with the rest of it. I've put out alot of them and havn't got any calls. This looks alot diffrent with more color and everything on the real fyler. Thanks! (My Computer wouldn't let me upload my real flyer so i did the best i could!)

THEGOLDPRO
05-26-2011, 09:48 PM
I see no flier????

TeenMMMowing
05-26-2011, 10:10 PM
LOL? I just said. erm. ok..... My computer wouldn't let me upload the image so i just copy and pasted what my flyer said ...

THEGOLDPRO
05-26-2011, 10:12 PM
So your saying you cant upload the actual flier??? How do you expect us to evaluate a flier if we cant see it?

blk90s13
05-26-2011, 10:13 PM
looks like crap oh wait I dont see it

wallace014
05-27-2011, 12:41 PM
man i would love to have someone around here that would clean up all the dog crap in my yard for 5 bucks i hate doing that

GravyTrain
05-27-2011, 03:05 PM
Kid, what these guys are trying to say, in not too many words is that the way the flyer is laid out, probably has about as much to do with the response you will get, as what is actually on the flyer.

Upload the actual image, and you'll get many more responses.

Greenlandscaping
05-29-2011, 04:08 AM
Check your wall i wrote you a message

cole32
06-02-2011, 09:24 AM
You should not charge $5.00 to pick up some sticks or some trash.

elitelawnteam1
06-02-2011, 09:45 AM
I don't really like "prices anywhere from..." I'd reword that.

Darryl G
06-02-2011, 10:29 AM
I think you need to work in some key words in there. Quality, affordable, value, dependable, courteous, flexible, reasonable, meticulous....that sort of thing. Hard working teen (I'd leave out actual age). I'd charge a premium for the doggy bombs and picking up some sticks is part of the job. Personally I wouldn't list pricing at all actually.

Pressedun
06-02-2011, 09:45 PM
I think you need to work in some key words in there. Quality, affordable, value, dependable, courteous, flexible, reasonable, meticulous....that sort of thing. Hard working teen (I'd leave out actual age). I'd charge a premium for the doggy bombs and picking up some sticks is part of the job. Personally I wouldn't list pricing at all actually.

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Precisely.