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pickupman96
02-21-2012, 06:22 PM
I am going to try a weekly coupon/ advertisement book this year. I am going to do a full page back cover for 2 weeks and 5 weeks of half page ads inside the book. This will be going to about 20k houses weekly. 240708
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srl28
02-21-2012, 08:58 PM
I like that a lot, may use it as somewhat of a template, not yours exactly but just as an idea. Very clean and easy to read. Quite professional too. Good luck!

pickupman96
02-23-2012, 12:42 PM
Anyone else??

Thanksman
02-23-2012, 12:53 PM
nice man :)

NC Greenscaper
02-23-2012, 06:21 PM
I like the ad copy. I've tried a coupon service b4 and had no results. Hope you have better luck than I.

pickupman96
02-23-2012, 08:08 PM
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pickupman96
02-23-2012, 08:09 PM
Thanks guys, anyone have any suggestions. I have a limited budget and just want to have the best ad possible for my money.
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jsslawncare
02-23-2012, 08:18 PM
I know it's not, but is every 3rd mow free? I think I would try to word that a little different. Otherwise I like it.

pickupman96
02-23-2012, 08:20 PM
I will have to change that some how. I didn't even realize that until you pointed it out.
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lawnagent
02-25-2012, 05:47 PM
I like it. I didn't see the 3rd mow free the way jsslawncare did. It was clear to me.

A-Land
02-27-2012, 12:23 AM
Lots of improvements to be made.

First, can the picture. Terrible idea. I'd consider finding a better picture and using it as the background to the ad if you're dead set on having a picture but I'd advise against it.

Blow up the size of that logo to the entire left side of the ad if you like the layout. Lose the picture and you have a ton more space.

Reword the services list. Fewer words. Use things like 'Lawn Service', 'Lawn Renovation' or 'Landscape Design and Build' rather than a specific list.

It's too late now but your website name is a mile long. A quick check reveals 'fullcirclect.com' and 'fullcircle-ct.com to be available. Both are better.

Email is at gmail? Come on... Get it set up on your domain!

Phone number only needs to be written once, but make it BIG!

Deals are... meh. Do you think having that deal will bring you more of the customers you want to have? Probably not.

Remember why you're advertising. It takes 20 times for someone to see your 'image' before they will think about using you. You want people to see your logo. Then see your trucks. This is part of a branding effort - Don't forget that if the calls don't come flying in. Stay consistent and make sure you're performing high quality work and it will pay off.