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JR Lawns
08-15-2003, 04:44 PM
All,

I am new to this web desgidn stuff. I threw this togther in about 4 hours.. I would like you comments, critisims etc...

www.jrlawns.com


THanks!

creativedan
08-15-2003, 05:04 PM
I have a seven acre lot i need mowed 15 bucks first two cuts?
u have a deal:D

JR Lawns
08-15-2003, 05:15 PM
Originally posted by creativedan
I have a seven acre lot i need mowed 15 bucks first two cuts?
u have a deal:D

LOL.. THanks for catching that, that is basically for postage stamp lots.. I will fix.. :D

Team Gopher
08-16-2003, 04:49 AM
Hi Joel,

Your site looks good! Did you do all the graphics yourself including the animated characters? Very creative!

JR Lawns
08-16-2003, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by Team Gopher
Hi Joel,

Your site looks good! Did you do all the graphics yourself including the animated characters? Very creative!

I did everthing except the little animated guys. A friend of mine gave me those.. I am not sure where her got them..

I used Xara webstyle to make the grpahics. www.xara.com

JohnK
08-22-2003, 02:05 PM
Hi Joel,
first thing your menu bar across the top is to wide forcing people to scroll horizontally (which pretty much everyone hates) even with the browser full screen at 1024x768 resolution. If possible you should design the page so it fit at least on a 1024 screen width wise and at 800x600 if possible.

You may also want to add your definitions of a "standard size lot" and "corner lot" on your FAQ page. You have different prices for them on the make payments page and should define what you mean those terms to mean so there is absolutely no mis understandings. If people can take something the wrong way - they will!

You might want to remove the link to "Customer lawns" until you have something to put there unless "coming soon" really means soon, as in in the next few days. Otherwise people will come back, see nothing has been done and wonder if there's ever going to be anything there.

Otherwise it's good, easy to read and navigate. Remember you can't make things to simple for people online.

John

JR Lawns
08-22-2003, 06:12 PM
John,

Thanks for the great feedback!!

I am updating the customers lawns page today! :D

JohnK
08-22-2003, 06:37 PM
Glad to help, and I'm glad you were able to make sense of that rambling.

Don't you hate it when you go back and read one of your own posts and wonder what ----- wrote that? :blush:

John