Amazing-DOOR HANGER-Critique Please

[CEW900]

Hey guys,

Tell me what you think. I personally love this door hanger. I think it looks great. Let me know what you guys think.

Thanks

If you guys are curious who designed this door hanger for me the graphics artist email is

[DUSTYCEDAR]

they look good hope they work well

[Team Gopher]

I think you have a winner with those door hangers!

[walker-talker]

Although it might be minow, the only thing I don't like is the shadows on the turf.

[Ray@LebanonTurf]

consider an 800# and or a BRM card to make it easy for prospects to reply. What is your unique selling proposition that sets you apart from your competition? Assuming that customers will get solicitations form numerous service providers why do they pick your company? Can't read any of the fine print but I should not need to in order to get that information.

[Soupy]

Your basic program starts at $25 a week. I understand that this is your minimum. But then you state that your full package starts at $125 a month. Are you saying that the $25 a week customers can expect to get 6 apps, shrub trimming, and ground cover maintenance for $25 more a month?

Like the design!

Soupy

[rvsuper]

I like it.

I don't think many saw the design I had done for my son:

[CEW900]

Soupy-
Concerning prices... Yea 25$ minimum. About the 125$ a month.. I realize the print is small and hard to read b.c i had to lower the resolution so i could upload it to lawnsite.com. Anywayes, if you read below the 125$ a month thing it says Call for details...
I was hoping by putting that in there it would entice people to call to find out more like what is the catch etc. I believed it would be better to increase the calls even if their calling just for misc. questions that way I could better explain how all it works and persuade them to use my services. I figured putting next to 125$ a month the words with 1 yr aggrement would scare people.


Rbuckwalter:
Sorry im by no means a graphics or print shop pro you mind explaining what 800# and BRM card means??

Walker-Talker:
Thanks for info on shadows.. You have a sharp eye.. I've shown this to about a couple dozen people and ur the first to notice its a distraction. I'll look at getting it removed.

[z_clark]

I really like your door hanger. I actually kind of like the shadows too....they look like they are coming from your sun logo. Best of luck to you!

[Let it Grow]

Look great. I love the shadows. It reminds me of an early, crisp summer morning...gotta love those! And it does look like they are coming from the sun on your logo. Very nice.

[CEW900]

thanks guys.. your input is grealy appreaciated.. makes me feel a little better before going to get 10,000 of these printed. :)

by the way the guy who made this only charged 60$ its a great price...

his email is gilles4u@yahoo.com

[AGLawnCare]

rvsuper

Did you know you left out the area code on the phone number?

[Gilla Gorilla]

That door hanger looks great. Hopefully it will help bring you
tons of business.

Good Luck
Justin

[Expert Lawns]

IF, and that is IF I could find anything wrong with it, would be that the grass looks yellow. Other than that, I think it is outstanding.

[gogetter]

I like them. I kinda like the shadows from the trees too. Mind if I ask where you're getting them printed at and what it's costing you?

Are you putting them out yourself? 10,000 is a LOT of work!:eek:

[CEW900]

Well, the expenses of that door hanger were.

60$ for a graphics artist to design it and countless days revising it with him.

I'm getting them printed at www.gotprint.com
Costs aprox 680$ after taxes. That's for 10,000 fliers.

The cost to put them out...
8$/hr in labor expense(cash) to day laborers.
I've had a proven 100-120 fliers able to be put out per hour in all our suburbia neighborhoods we service.
Total Labor Expense is Aprox: 800$

Total Cost to Print and Distribute: Aprox: $1540