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Logsdonlawncare
09-04-2004, 10:10 PM
This is my first thread and first year doing fall cleanup, so bear with me. Just wanted to know if this flyer looks professional or kindergarten looking? Thanks for all of the input. You guys are great!!

qualitylandscaping
09-04-2004, 10:11 PM
looks good.. nice work

Precision
09-04-2004, 10:29 PM
personally I wouldn't advertise discounts for seniors or neighbors. That seems to bring out the cheapskates and time wasters. Same thing with affordable rates. I don't know what that means, but for many people it means an opportunity to beat you up on price.

Also list your home number as the office number, unless it is likely to be answered by a little kid or something.

I might also put
Do you like bug bites and blisters
If not,
leave the leaves to us.

and get rid of the smaller line about bugs and blisters.

Good luck hope this helps

beransfixitinc
09-04-2004, 10:30 PM
I'd move that one leaf up out of the area code in the phone number though.

economiclawncare
09-04-2004, 10:50 PM
i thinks it looks good but would take off home # and remove discount. Having home number looks unprofessional. IMO

Logsdonlawncare
09-04-2004, 10:51 PM
OK here is the updated version....

Logsdonlawncare
09-04-2004, 10:54 PM
And i changed home to office..thanks for the replys guys

qualitylandscaping
09-04-2004, 10:59 PM
too much yellow..

chefdrp
09-04-2004, 11:55 PM
it looks good to me.

lawn
09-05-2004, 12:05 AM
I like it a lot, the only thing I will hesitate to leave is the Cell number. i would like to leave just the office numbers.
By the way how did you make it? I want to do something similar but I do not know how.

Ken Kesey
09-05-2004, 01:03 AM
I think the free estimates within 24 hours is a good line.

A little bit of cheese for the flyer.

Logsdonlawncare
09-05-2004, 01:16 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone. I bought ms publisher yesterday along with some clip art program(royalty free) and slopped it together in about 4 hours or so. It took longer than i expected but i had a few beers in me as well, maybe that was the problem?

Expert Lawns
09-05-2004, 05:33 PM
I would put "Neighborhood Discounts" or "Group Discounts". The whole bugs, bites and bags would confuse me if i were John Q Customer. What about "To avoid bugs, bites and bagging, leave YOUR leaves to us" just a thought.

You have a lot of good ideas. The return should be nice

Team Gopher
09-06-2004, 09:46 PM
Very nice work Logsdonlawncare. Let us what type of response you get when you hand them out.

Green Care
09-06-2004, 10:06 PM
Name and office # needs to be at Toppp.

mkemp
09-07-2004, 12:54 AM
I don't really like the starburst,, It's hard to read. And I would also, make your name and number bigger. But over all I think it's pretty good.!!

Black95gt
09-07-2004, 11:01 AM
How did you get the MS publisher uploaded to the site? I have tried uploading mine and it doesnt except the file format?

The C Man
09-07-2004, 12:02 PM
I'd get rid of "affordable rates." What's affordable & reasonable to one person is unaffordable & unreasonable to another, so in the end that line doesn't really say anything.

Racer99
09-10-2004, 03:35 PM
I as well would like to know how it was made? Maybe they could send us the attachment? :blob3:

Expert Lawns
09-12-2004, 01:24 PM
I too am curious as to how it was made. How bout a hint?

Lawnchoice
09-12-2004, 01:43 PM
What did you write the flyer in? ie;program

jajwrigh
09-12-2004, 05:37 PM
Honestly, I think it looks good! I agree with some of the other guys though about dropping the discount part of the ad. Good luck with it!

DUSTYCEDAR
09-12-2004, 05:38 PM
that looks great :D

Logsdonlawncare
09-15-2004, 12:48 PM
the flyer was made with MS Publisher and I also used a clip art program ( royalty free).

Thanks for the replies all
Todd