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Eddie B
03-11-2005, 11:34 AM
2 Flyers, 1st will go to homes, the 2nd one has pull-tabs and will be placed on bulliten boards in grocery store entrances, etc. Tell me what you think, and what I need to do. I've got 5,000 sheets of paper here and a fresh toner cartridge just dying to get used. Thanks! :p

proenterprises
03-11-2005, 11:34 AM
where is it?

nevermind, found it.

proenterprises
03-11-2005, 11:37 AM
They are both the same when I click on them. You are missing dashes between lines. I would list them in a bullet form rather than accross on a line, looks better that way. Put "a" free estimate rather than "your" free estimate.

Eddie B
03-11-2005, 11:39 AM
is the picture showing up at the bottom of the first flyer? 1st flyer should have a picture, 2nd should have tabs.

twins_lawn_care
03-11-2005, 12:30 PM
the first flyer is putting the picture on a second page
the picture itself, looks nice, but the one stepping stone doesn't appear to be blown off, and looks like this company didn't do a complete job. I'd be hesitant to use that picture myself for this fact, that it stands out.

LB1234
03-11-2005, 12:59 PM
Sorry, but IMHO, the flyers need a lot of work. Perform a search and read/view others flyers here on LS. Get some ideas and read the feedback they received.

ztoro
03-11-2005, 01:09 PM
wording is good.. but the design is Blah...... If you want people to remember you or take a second look at your flyer try to dress it up a bit... I think Gopher has some free flyers..

Eddie B
03-11-2005, 04:33 PM
thanks guys... I was considering a new photo myself. This was taken after a landscape job, not a mow job.

twins_lawn_care
03-11-2005, 04:41 PM
here's a quick and dirty just to throw out some ideas for you. kind of covered up the bad part of the pic.

Eddie B
03-11-2005, 04:53 PM
wow... thanks twins. I'm limited to black and white printing at the moment. That would fit perfect for a post card. Looks really well. I've dug up another lawn pic.

Eddie B
03-11-2005, 05:02 PM
I converted the image...

John P.
03-11-2005, 05:06 PM
they don't catch the eye