Spring / Fall Cleanup ...This is important, or you're robbing yourself out of more than half. The "Commercial Equipment" is irrelevant. Change that to Dependable Service. Get rid of the "low prices"...you aren't walmart. If you are going to say something like that, use a term like Competitive Rates. Change the numbers...They aren't easily readable and just look like a mess. And what's with the background? How much is THAT going to cost to print? It just needs alot of work. Do some reviews at some of the other fliers on here, and look for the compliments and comments. This will give you a MUCH better approach. Don't get me wrong...I commend you on what you are doing,....you just need to approach it different.
Thank you, Dad - for always being the dad that you were. You truly are my hero. You always were.