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Old 04-09-2011, 08:40 PM
LawnGuy35 LawnGuy35 is offline
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I'd lose "Lawn need a cuttin?" (everyone's lawn "needs a cuttin") and replace it with something like "Enjoy more free time this year!" or "Avoid the hassles of yard work this year!" In other words, include a benefit to the homeowner in your headline.

Then maybe your subhead could be something like, "Let us help you with reliable lawn care at reasonable rates."
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