Originally Posted by theraceshop
I would still get rid of this - a relatively
new, but experienced business created in 2011
I would tend to shy away from newbie or they also might think they could take advantage of you. Just my opinion It also doesn't flow well when reading.
I also agree, I would also get rid of the tough economy we will work with you line. I would also lose the biweekly lawn mowing, i am not sure that is something to advertizie even if you do it. Also the astrix after it, I don't think it is good to put in small print what you want everyone to know. Maybe instead of saying services and list a sampling of what you offer, why not replace services with something like "A complete yard care company"
Spring & Fall Cleanups
Hedge & Shrub Trimming
Small Tree Trimming & Pruning
Tree & Plant Installation
Weeding & Mulching
Residential Snow removal
and much more!
I use the byline "your yard the way you like!"