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Old 01-22-2013, 09:42 AM
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I agree with JayBrown. There is nothing engaging about it. People tend to underestimate how much people don't want to read a mass of words.

If you went as is, there are quite a few formatting issues. You have line spacing issues where you change from the large to smaller fonts. Reading paragraphs of centered text is not how we are conditioned to read, which creates an awkward visual experience (look at the "recommend the most" like).

The paragraph below "Early Bird Special" needs some formatting help and attention to spacing.

Is there a second side?
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