Originally Posted by Mayor of Mow Town
There's lots you can do to improve your flyer.
I think you need to work on both the words and the design, as they both work together to help get results. It doesn't have to be fancy, but you can certainly do some things to make your flyer more attractive and effective.
I've attached some comments (directly on the flyer so it's easier to understand).
Thanks, appreciate the constructive criticism.