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Old 05-01-2013, 12:44 AM
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Constructive Criticism Alert!

That ad is horrible to look at.

I like your logo and the consistent use of colors and such, but wow - I would NEVER read that ad. (and I didn't)

The ad should not require effort to follow from beginning to end.

I don't like the headline either. (the "text" portion in all caps)
IF YOU DONT USE US FOR LAWNCARE, JUST SEE WHAT YOUR MISSING!

(a) There's a "negative" hidden in there. ("don't use us for lawn care")
(b) It could be simplified - "See What You've Been Missing!"



Aside from that, I'm sure your post will help some people. Judging by 99% of the ads I see on CL, people need all the help they can get.


Edit: I'm a graphic designer with 10+ yrs experience
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