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Old 05-01-2013, 02:02 AM
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Originally Posted by jacobsenDW220 View Post
Here's some advice from an average Joe consumer... GET RID OF ALL THAT MESS IN THE MIDDLE OF YOUR ADVERTISEMENT! Without exaggeration, it hurt my eyes when I scrolled down to it. That section is waaaaaaaaay too busy... changing font size, changing font color, bold on/off, overwriting pictures, green background, white background... If I have to concentrate that hard to read and understand an advertisement, it won't get read.
I concur, so much contracting going on with every line my eyes did not want to follow or look at the colored text. Here are the parts I actually read, Thank you for visiting our craigslist ad. We are a full service lawn care and landscape company. Locally owned and operated. Licensed and Insured. Scroll down and view the image. You may click on it and it will take you directly to our website where you can find out more about us and fill out an easy contact form.

Then I read your tags, the right was a fight with my eyes.
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