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Old 08-26-2013, 10:46 AM
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Originally Posted by TTS View Post
Mike, in addition to the typo you noticed on your next run I might change the end of the referral part to only new customers qualify for referral discount. It's a wording thing but it sounds a little more professional that way. Also for your neighbor discount it's pretty wordy and fairly subjective as to how close the properties must be, some may think it's ok to ride your mower a block away without moving the truck, others may not. You might try something simple like call for details on our neighbor discount program or for a more enticing call to action call for details on how to receive up to 20% off through our neighbor discount program.
thanks good advice
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