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Old 11-06-2013, 04:52 PM
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- You should be using "suit", not "suite".
- I'd also recommend you sweep for punctuation issues.
- From a continuity standpoint, you vary between left-aligned and centered text. You can do both, you just didn't apply it uniformly (such as the text below the photo).
- Your contact form is in, what I assume to be, the center of the trifold. You're telling people to cut the middle out of your brochure. (Either way, I don't think you'll find too many people mail will mail that back to you, so it seems a bit "I don't know what else to put in here" filler.)
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