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Old 03-01-2003, 01:04 PM
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Flyer Critique

OK so here is my attempt for now, let me know what you think... right or wrong

I put this up as an adobe pdf for anyone wanting to know for opeining it
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Old 03-01-2003, 03:10 PM
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I have to say, I really dont like it. Sorry I'm just being honest. Not only that what is ENTERPSIS? Unless thats a word I was never taught in school, you better change your logo, That is your business name. You shouldnt spell that wrong.
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Old 03-01-2003, 03:31 PM
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Did you do the landscaping in the pic?? and your just started yeah right.

and sorry but I don't like the flyer...to much text on it
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Old 03-01-2003, 04:49 PM
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I am sorry did not spell check the page,

Logo is Beasley Enterprises

I cut down on it KISS method I guess it better ...

trying to push out many different projects at the same time... will have to segment the flyers I think then.. but here is the updated try


iclgs, I have not said if I just started or have been around doing it for a while. This my current attempt for a flyer that is all


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Old 03-01-2003, 07:07 PM
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A few suggestions:

Products / Services

We have expanded our offerings to include:
(Use bullet format)
* Mulch, Gravel, Stone, Fill and Topsoil delivery and installation.

* Lawn maintenance, spring and fall clean-ups, power washing and snow plowing.

* Holiday and special occasion lighting.

* Ask about our annual agreement discounts.

With our Premier Partners program we are also offering, flooring, tile, replacement windows, electrical work and computer installation, training, upgrades and repairs.

Put Beasley Enterprises, LLC below the picture.

Hope this helps.

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Old 03-01-2003, 08:27 PM
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Ok here its an refined version
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Old 03-02-2003, 07:47 AM
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Old 03-03-2003, 02:13 AM
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The very last one didn't show up for me either. The second to last one worked, but I didn't like it (sorry). So unless there are significant changes on the last version, I'd say it still needs work.

There are sentences that seem to be missing words. Example: "Installation and Delivery Mulch".

There were a couple other sentences that didn't make sense to me either.

Last comment, and this isn't really about the flier itself. But if I was looking for a lawn guy, I hire a lawn guy. And if I'm looking for a floor or computer guy, I hire a floor or computer guy, not a lawn guy. Maybe that's just me though.
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Old 03-04-2003, 12:29 PM
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Well,

I am listening to what is being said,

Here is the latest, but I did have to shrink down the pictures to be able to post it on lawnsite, held to 157k or so ....

hopefully it will post
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Old 03-26-2003, 03:23 PM
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First thing.

We do lawnservice, landscaping and TRAIN your monkey to dance at an hourly rate.

Specialize a bit. This flyer gives an image of a desperate person or company. Even if you are desperate for work....don't show it. It is not good for business.


People do not want to see too many things.

Decide what you are strong at and advertise for that, with specific details about your specialty.

Remember a person who is Jack-of-all trades is King of none.


Just my thoughts.
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