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10-22-2005, 12:24 PM
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my first web page
please let me know what you think. would you change anything, add anything? i wanna hear the good and the bad as this is my first web site.
http://www.greenergrasslawns.com 
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#2
10-22-2005, 06:35 PM
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The site is looking good. Some suggestions;
1. Clean up your text...on your sub title bar and titles for pages very pixelated. 2. Some links to enlarge your photos dont work 3. Make sure that you are using the same text size and type across the site. These are only my suggestions...however you are in the right direction.
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Cheers, Richard Murphy http://www.murphyslawns.com Become a Fan of Murphy Property Maintenance We are Property Maintenance Professionals
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#3
10-23-2005, 09:07 PM
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Looks very good.
Add the comma in...After working with Greener Grass, you will realize that our attentive customer service and our quality workmanship make Greener Grass an excellent candidate for developing a business relationship with! You also might want to shorten this sentence a little.
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