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Old 07-01-2006, 06:41 PM
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New website

This is my new website, your comments are appreciated.

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Old 07-01-2006, 07:29 PM
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Simple yet informative.

Why advertise that you provide tree trimming and then give out someone elses number for tree trimming?

How about some shots of yards that you've nicely trimmed up?
Get a better camera, the one on your cell phone doesnt cut it.
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You are "pretty darn dependable?" I want someone that is ALWAYS dependable. Consider re-phrasing this.
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Old 07-01-2006, 08:29 PM
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Simple yet informative.

Why advertise that you provide tree trimming and then give out someone elses number for tree trimming?

How about some shots of yards that you've nicely trimmed up?
Get a better camera, the one on your cell phone doesnt cut it.
Spell check- A chore is something you do around the house. A choir is a group of people that sing. (Lawn Maintenance Page)
You are "pretty darn dependable?" I want someone that is ALWAYS dependable. Consider re-phrasing this.
Thanks for the comments. Don't know where i pulled that chore thing from.

I started this site last night so have more to do. I have better pics on laptop, have to fire it up and transfer them.

I'm not happy with the pretty darn dependable thing either. Trying to come up with better slogan.

As far as tree thing I trim small to medium size but referral is for large trees.

Thanks again. I guess I am accomplishing my goal of simple but informative. That is what I want.
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Old 07-01-2006, 08:35 PM
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Get rid of the tree referral so they will ask you first and you get first right of refusal and can then refer them when it is too big for ya. That'll up your small to medium jobs at least.
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Old 07-01-2006, 08:58 PM
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Changed to Tree Removal in phone book. thanks
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