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Old 11-12-2009, 10:54 PM
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Nice web page but you have to look over your spelling...Weed eating and grass trimming is the same thing.But i like your pagr you just need more pictures up there.......MySunSetLandscaping.com
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Old 11-12-2009, 11:03 PM
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Nice web page but you have to look over your spelling...Weed eating and grass trimming is the same thing.But i like your pagr you just need more pictures up there.......MySunSetLandscaping.com
is that your site? because I think you need to check your spelling and grammar too...
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Old 11-12-2009, 11:10 PM
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A great start. Here are some thoughts:

"Our ideal goal" is waaaaaay too passive for a business. Show some commitment.

Counting the page title, your company's name is visible 8 times on the home page. VERY redundant.

On the SERVICES page, don't tell them to call after each paragraph. Put it at the top or bottom of the page in bold. Also, I would try to condense your description to as few words as possible - or you'll lose them before they reach the bottom.

Put your company logo on your image above the menu.
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Old 11-22-2009, 08:13 PM
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Nice web page but you have to look over your spelling...Weed eating and grass trimming is the same thing.But i like your pagr you just need more pictures up there.......MySunSetLandscaping.com
Loose the word "Stoneing"...
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Old 11-22-2009, 10:46 PM
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YOU NEED A PAGE TITLE AND KEYWORDS!!! You are also not indexed with google as of this post-meaning your site does not exist to Google. Here is your <HEAD> code

<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
<html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
<head>
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8" />
<title>Allstar Lawncare - Webster NY 14580</title>
<link href="twoColHybLtHdr.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" />
<!--[if IE]>
<style type="text/css">
/* place css fixes for all versions of IE in this conditional comment */
.twoColHybLtHdr #sidebar1 { padding-top: 30px; }
.twoColHybLtHdr #mainContent { zoom: 1; padding-top: 15px; }
/* the above proprietary zoom property gives IE the hasLayout it may need to avoid several bugs */
</style>
<![endif]--></head>

IF you have access to this page I Would Add the following code in your <HEAD> section here are my keyword and setup use no more than 15 keywords and less than 200 characters for your description.

<meta name="DC.title" content="BREVARD LAWNS | The premier Lawn Care Service for Melbourne and Brevard FL" />
<meta name="description" content="Brevard Lawns is your complete online solution for all of your lawn care needs in Melbourne, Brevard County Florida. Visit us Today! melbourne lawn care, melbourne fl, melbourne lawn care fl, viera lawn care, brevard lawn care" />
<meta name="keywords" content="lawn care melbourne,melbourne lawn care fl,lawn care brevard,lawn care brevard fl,lawn care melbounre,suntree lawn care,viera lawn care,brevard lawns,brevard lawn" />


I will be happy to help you if you have any questions-Here is the site I built for my company...

www.brevardlawns.com
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Old 12-17-2009, 10:18 PM
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Hey JDutcher, do exactly what Blue2000 said and of course spell check, and maybe shrink down that header graphic a whisker. If you need a hand with that graphic, resizing the image and or file size I'll be happy to do that for you.
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Old 12-17-2009, 11:53 PM
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Keywords

Hey man just a heads up Google stopped using keywords september 19th....I HIGHLY SUGGEST USING TAG CLOUDS
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Old 12-20-2009, 07:15 PM
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websites

if you want you can check out my website to help get some more idea's

www.mblawncare.com
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Old 12-20-2009, 08:15 PM
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I would add local keywords to the content on your home page like "lawn care New York" "lawn service new york" and incorporate them in to the articles on the front page.
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Old 12-21-2009, 12:00 AM
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Here is your header code:

<meta name="description" content="M&amp;B LAWNCARE &amp; LANDSCAPES - ASHLAND, KY. &quot;BIG BUSINESS QUALITY, SMALL BUSINESS PRICING&quot;. Landscaping Services">

<meta name="keywords" content="M&amp;B LAWNCARE &amp; LANDSCAPES, Landscaping Services, ASHLAND, KY">


I would make your description clean Like "Brevard Lawns is your complete online solution for all of your lawn care needs in Melbourne, Brevard County Florida. Visit us Today! melbourne lawn care, melbourne fl, melbourne lawn care fl, viera lawn care, brevard lawn care"

Add key words to the end of your description like my above example:

HERE IS SOME GREAT KNOWLEDGE: http://www.google.com/url?sa=t&sourc...pGZXW3NwllgNAQ
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