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KINGSBURYLANDSCAPELLC · #1 03-22-2010, 12:58 PM

Hey everyone
So i finally updated (myself) my website that i have neglected and basically never made worth looking at. Let me know your thoughts!
www.kingsburylandscapedesign.com

KINGSBURYLANDSCAPELLC · #2 03-26-2010, 09:33 PM

thoughts? suggestions?

McFarland_Lawn_Care · #3 03-27-2010, 05:31 AM

Hey, that looks awesome, Jason. I'd like some info on your organic program. I am also kicking off a 100% organic program this season and just curious where you get your products. I'll send you a PM. Website looks awesome!!

KINGSBURYLANDSCAPELLC · #4 03-27-2010, 08:55 AM

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Originally Posted by McFarland_Lawn_Care

Hey, that looks awesome, Jason. I'd like some info on your organic program. I am also kicking off a 100% organic program this season and just curious where you get your products. I'll send you a PM. Website looks awesome!!

Sure not a problem! Appreciate the comments!

thempikes · #5 03-27-2010, 10:55 AM

Message is short and to the point. That's good. Get's the readers attention.

Visually appealing and that is good. Works for Hollywood!

KINGSBURYLANDSCAPELLC · #6 04-01-2010, 09:01 AM

Anyone else have thoughts or suggestions?

Inspira · #7 04-12-2010, 04:18 PM

Looks good, I would maybe try to tighten up the top - no need for the white part to be so tall, and maybe have your logo overlap the large header image. Speaking of - maybe alternate header images on different pages, not too hard to do and will add a little kick to it. Also would suggest using a more landscape-themed image.

Take all of the keywords out of your footer.

It's all in the details - I'm a designer so I notice this stuff - for example, on your organic page, the first paragraph has "Organic lawns also have the best resistance against drought & diseases" in a separate font - looks odd to me. Likewise, the first paragraph under "Your Family's Health" is center-aligned.

Your sentence flow can use a bit of help but it's not terrible. Clean up the grammar and punctuation some more.

Do you have keywords? The code is odd, (I feel the same way about Yahoo as you guys do with HD or Scott's) I couldn't find any.

Overall though, not bad at all. Good job.

mdvaden · #8 04-13-2010, 02:49 AM

Looks pretty good.

I like the flower photo idea. But do you think the spots on it have sort of a bird poop look to them? We have birds, that's why the spots came to mind, Reminded me of the shoulder of my tee-shirt after the bird does its business. I change tee shirts a lot.