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Old 01-17-2012, 06:05 PM
osmann_lawn osmann_lawn is offline
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Website updated! I did a lot of changes. Let me know what you guys think? Also if there is any spelling errors let me know. Thanks!
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Old 01-18-2012, 09:20 AM
theraceshop theraceshop is offline
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I would still get rid of this - a relatively
new, but experienced business created in 2011

I would tend to shy away from newbie or they also might think they could take advantage of you. Just my opinion It also doesn't flow well when reading.

I would also change up your ABOUT US page looks like a resume Don't let people think you have no experience. The way I read it sounds to much like you have none.

Get rid of the dude on the rider. Have someone take a pic of you in full gear weed trimming or planting a tree or flowers.

Maybe others can chime in here. But the whole image you want to convay is that your the best and you will make the property look great.

Last edited by theraceshop; 01-18-2012 at 09:28 AM. Reason: Add something
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Old 01-18-2012, 09:35 AM
ralph02813 ralph02813 is offline
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I would still get rid of this - a relatively
new, but experienced business created in 2011

I would tend to shy away from newbie or they also might think they could take advantage of you. Just my opinion It also doesn't flow well when reading.
I also agree, I would also get rid of the tough economy we will work with you line. I would also lose the biweekly lawn mowing, i am not sure that is something to advertizie even if you do it. Also the astrix after it, I don't think it is good to put in small print what you want everyone to know. Maybe instead of saying services and list a sampling of what you offer, why not replace services with something like "A complete yard care company"

Mowing
seeding/overseeding
Spring & Fall Cleanups
Hedge & Shrub Trimming
Small Tree Trimming & Pruning
Tree & Plant Installation
Weeding & Mulching
Residential Snow removal
and much more!

I use the byline "your yard the way you like!"
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Old 01-18-2012, 01:06 PM
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Looks good just a few changes as mentioned above. What company/program did you use to make the site and register the domain name?
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