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Old 04-14-2013, 10:02 AM
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Ok, I have changed the site quite a bit.

Please evaluate for me. I tried to keep it very simple.

www.truturfnc.com
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Old 04-14-2013, 10:41 AM
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Text does'nt read right. " TruTurf, Inc. provides lawn, turfgrass, and garden solutions by providing a licensed and ornamental turfgrass specialist to administer lawn treatment applications."

Something like "Tru Turf provides full lawn and garden solutions by our trained turfgrass specialists" sounds a little better.

And text is not aligned or justified proper. Too many blank spaces between words.
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Old 04-14-2013, 03:51 PM
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Ben, On your package page, have you thought about just graphically breaking it into three price points big and prominent, then creating an include list below each, with the benefits growing longer for each progressively higher package?

Look at how other sellers, like your internet provider or phone company,handle package sells to get some ideas. The spreadsheet-esque table doesn't provide any excitement, it doesn't lead them to your premium package and all of the numbers just create confusion about it being a package in the first place.

It's spring..the time to sell packages. Make it a focus and drive from your home page.
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Old 04-14-2013, 04:05 PM
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Ben, On your package page, have you thought about just graphically breaking it into three price points big and prominent, then creating an include list below each, with the benefits growing longer for each progressively higher package?

Look at how other sellers, like your internet provider or phone company,handle package sells to get some ideas. The spreadsheet-esque table doesn't provide any excitement, it doesn't lead them to your premium package and all of the numbers just create confusion about it being a package in the first place.

It's spring..the time to sell packages. Make it a focus and drive from your home page.
That's a good idea. I'm going to edit that page some and remove the spreadsheet table.
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Old 04-14-2013, 04:50 PM
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I like the color motif, but would agree with the other comments on the lack of readability. The layout is simple, thus easy to navigate. I would not necessarily put prices on the site--save those for when you do quotes.
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Old 04-15-2013, 11:51 AM
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Agree with suggestions above. Have someone go over the text for grammar and readability.

I read your About page and would suggest some improvement there. People go to that page to learn about your company history and the people behind it. Shorten the company bio. Eliminate the comment about not being driven by profit- even if its true no one will believe it. Include a short, personable bio for each member of management or ownership. If that is just you- fine. Include a headshot. Want to differentiate yourself from Trugreen? Show that you are a person- not a corporation. Do not write like a corporation, let a bit of your personality show.
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Old 05-02-2013, 01:37 PM
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BUMP

I have taken all your comments into consideration and made changes based on most of them, I appreciate it. I am showing up a little higher in organic search in terms of "weed control, Wilmington NC & Lawn treatment company wilmington".

I am about to start a Google Adwords campaign and would like one last batch of comments or suggestions on my almost final draft, thanks.

www.TruTurfNC.com
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Old 05-03-2013, 10:18 PM
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Looks great!

On your "Treatment Plans" page, the numbers don't add up for two of them.

The TruTurf Key Treatment Plan shows 5 Lawn Treatments at $27.85 per month over 7 months. Annual Cost = $195.00.

Shouldn't the annual cost be $139.25? (5 x $27.85)
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The TruTurf Intermediate Treatment Plan shows 6 lawn treatments at $31.75 per month over 7 months. Annual Cost = $225.25

Shouldn't the annual cost be $190.50? (6 x $31.75)
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The TruTurf Ultimate Treatment Plan adds up correctly. 8 treatments at $35.00 per month over 7 months. Annual Cost = $280.00
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Everything looks good though.

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Old 05-03-2013, 10:35 PM
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That would b if it was priced per Service, its actually times 7 payments (months)
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