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Old 01-14-2004, 10:42 AM
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Sprin letter

what do you guys think?
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Old 01-14-2004, 10:47 AM
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In order to serve you better I have set up an E-mail account thought Yahoo.Com so you can have one more way for you to reach, should you need to, that address is MCSLawnRescue@yahoo.com


Read this sentence out loud...it does not make sense and is gramatically incorrect.
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Old 01-14-2004, 10:52 AM
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at Yahoo.com so you will have an additional outlet for contact if needed
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Old 01-15-2004, 10:41 PM
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For your convenience, I have set up an E-mail address where you will be able to reach me also. The address is-----bla bla- bla
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Old 01-16-2004, 11:42 AM
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Hi Chris,

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If you decide not to have a spring clean up done please have all childrenís toys, tree limbs, sticks, and rocks removed from the lawn prior to the first week of April.
Do you want that not in there?
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Old 01-16-2004, 12:02 PM
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Here are a few changes i made
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Old 01-16-2004, 12:04 PM
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well, i did add a spelling eror in there! lol but also made changes to the structure and formating of the letter. Hope that helps.
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Old 01-16-2004, 01:00 PM
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that looks real good. simple and to the point.
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Old 01-16-2004, 02:01 PM
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It still needs some revision and in your title it should be NJ both in caps.
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Old 01-16-2004, 04:35 PM
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Spring Letter

Here is the letter I used last year. I am currently making revisions, as some of our services/policies have changed.
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