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Old 03-27-2006, 10:03 PM
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Advice on my News Paper Add

Any advice on makeing my add better?
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:09 PM
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I kind of like it are you hiding your phone #?
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:10 PM
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Looks great!! I would hate to pay for the cost to run it though. I hope you get a good response. Good luck!
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:23 PM
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I decided to leave my phone number out. I pay 400.00 for 6month in my local paper. It's a double size add. I really need HELP with my LOVE YOUR LAWN PACKAGE. What's in the package? What would you offer in this special package?
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:27 PM
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That ad looks like something from the forties. Whered you get that? Seriously.....it looks pretty old school but no matter I suppose.

Love your lawn package....Who's idea was that and why dont you know what it is????

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Old 03-27-2006, 10:32 PM
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I do not like the "love your lawn" package. What exactly does that mean?
Get down to business, and tell the reader what services you provide instead.
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:33 PM
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I thought the same thing so i would call you to find out what it is.

Have your package deal by the phone so when they ask you tell them and set up the estimate right away.
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:42 PM
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This is the first week for the add so I need to think quick on my new offering. Any ideas what should be in the package? How would YOU sell this package?I really need help here.
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:53 PM
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Do you like the hearts?
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Old 03-27-2006, 11:03 PM
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Dude, you need to give people a discount for your services that you are going to provide in your "love your lawn" or what ever. If you have some seed and starter fert and an aerifier offer it in a combo package and discount it if they sign up for a whole year.

interesting logo...looks cool
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