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Old 02-17-2007, 11:06 AM
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i like it..good job!
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Old 02-18-2007, 08:13 PM
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Ok, this is a little different, I may have went the wrong direction with this, so, let me know what you all think.

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Old 02-18-2007, 10:30 PM
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Change "We also offer referral incentives also. Other services available at request."

You are also missing several commas.

Do you know what your incentives are? People are going to want to know when they call.
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Old 02-18-2007, 11:54 PM
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Thanks echeandia, I caught the also part too after I had posted this. As far as the incentives are, was thinking along the lines of 10 to 20% off another mowing, what do you think on that one.

Jason
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Old 02-19-2007, 12:10 AM
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what software?

hey man i was just wondering what the software was that you used I like your flyer a lot though.
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Old 02-19-2007, 12:23 AM
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The website is www.smartdraw.com. Before I bought it, I used a trial version, drew up a quick flyer, liked it, but they had their watermark on it, so I decided to buy the software, mainly because my wife and I can use it for alot of different things.

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Old 02-20-2007, 12:08 AM
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Ok

Last one, promise, I redesigned it this time. Tell me what you all think on this one. Time is running out, got to get these out.

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Old 02-20-2007, 12:20 AM
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Also, one more thing, these will be mailed out. Any suggestions on where or how to get these printed and mailed out.

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Jason
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Old 02-20-2007, 12:23 AM
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Not bad...you have a typo..."new costomers" (customers)
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Old 02-20-2007, 12:33 AM
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I'd put a colon after Sunrise Lawncare offers a variety of professional lawncare solutions and eliminate the phrase Some things you may want to have done.
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