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[Bobcat s250 NY]

Hey guys . Im looking for some feedback on my two websites. Any input would be greatly appreciated.. Thanks

[jcantrell]

To begin I would lose the music.

[Bobcat s250 NY]

and then ?

[poolboy]

I don't hear any music???? Change your home page background, behind the lettering, like your other pages.

[mdvaden]

The one with the yellow buttons looks promising. I don't care for the other site.

The one with the yellow buttons; the letters are a bit faded and hard to read.

You could make some better to read one at the site I started a thread for...

http://www.buttongenerator.com

personally, I take your small images that are next to one another, move them to the left where the menu is, stacked on on top of the other, maybe with a space, and make a horizontal menu to put in the small space where a barely visable "b" is stll stuck. Just under the header.

If you like those buttons / menus, if some are for members only, the days and hours are under for when they will be free.

Check out my thread on that, for tips on how to use the site.

[jcantrell]

there is still music on the irrigation pages -residential -services.

first work on the landscape page (it is more organized)
change the white behind the text to match the backround. On your sample photos page maybe put the thumnail pictures surrounding the larger one so there isn't so much scrolling. Maybe you could use a picture viewer.

There is a free one at http://www.airtightinteractive.com/simpleviewer/ but there are many more out there.

[Bobcat s250 NY]

Thanks guys im gonna work on it...

[Uranus]

I would lose the white behind the text on the home page too.

Also my first thought when I went to testimonials was "Wow someone wrote a long letter." How about using the quote and then tossing Susan A, and town just under the quote. Might break it up a little. That way it looks like there are a bunch of quotes and not just one long one. Looks good. Like your pics too.

[mdvaden]

Originally Posted by Williams LC

I would lose the white behind the text on the home page too.

Also my first thought when I went to testimonials was "Wow someone wrote a long letter." How about using the quote and then tossing Susan A, and town just under the quote. Might break it up a little. That way it looks like there are a bunch of quotes and not just one long one. Looks good. Like your pics too.

That's exactly what I did on my testimonials. I extracted the most relevant compliments. So the entire testimonials page contains only about 5% to 10% of what the letters said.