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Old 03-14-2008, 09:25 PM
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honest opinions on this ad

THIS IS A POTENTIAL NEWSPAPER AD AND/OR HALF SHEET FLYER.

give me your honest opinions on this ad/flyer please!
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Old 03-14-2008, 09:29 PM
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Honestly it is pretty good I take it is going in newspaper correct. I would change the 50 percent to the first mowing with a acceptance of a season contract or agreement. My opinion.
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Old 03-14-2008, 09:33 PM
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thanks walker, the problem is i don't do contracts so i figured adding "new customers" to the coupon would make it sound better. This ad would be going in a newspaper and/or would be a half sheet flyer on colored paper.

any other opinions?
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Old 03-14-2008, 09:36 PM
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Looks good.

Just....I would put my phone # in stead of phone numbers go here
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Old 03-15-2008, 09:58 AM
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Do you maintain landscapes as well? I think I would replace "lawn maintenance" with "landscape maintenance" if so. You already have lawn mowing as your first bullet,which you might switch to "complete lawn care"

Just my opinion
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Old 03-15-2008, 10:07 AM
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Maybe this will help
Good luck
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Old 03-15-2008, 02:30 PM
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thanks eco star for your changes on my ad. They do make it look better and more professional.
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Old 03-15-2008, 11:11 PM
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after thinking about the changes ecostar made for my ad, i decided that i will use them in my ad. these changes make me look a heck of alot more professional, while the old one basically said "HI my name is JOE BLOW and I want to mow your lawn" lol I might change one other thing, but thanks for the advice!
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Old 03-15-2008, 11:40 PM
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The one ecostar posted is a lot better.
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