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Old 02-12-2010, 09:18 PM
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Need your Reviews.

Please Critique our webcite.
Tell me what you like and dislike.
Thank you for your time.

This site is under construction.
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Old 02-12-2010, 09:39 PM
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Looks good! you have a lot of info and things to click, good job. What did that cost you?
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Old 02-12-2010, 10:14 PM
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made it my self, but i need some work
WHat do you like or dislike about it?
What would you change?
I need some input.
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Old 02-12-2010, 10:36 PM
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Need Your Opinins, Review and Critique

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Please Critique our website.
Tell me what you like and dislike.
Thank you for your time.

This site is under construction.
http://perfecttouchlandscapes.com
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Old 02-13-2010, 01:30 AM
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made it my self
That's pretty good, I'm not usually impressed...

On another note nice captcha, unless things have changed in recent years that's no beginner trick...
So is it php or asp based?

Dang, I thought when you said you made it, that meant you coded it...
That's kind of a downer lol, but it does make up for it some in looks.

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but i need some work
Yeah, they all do that.

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WHat do you like or dislike about it?
What would you change?
This part:
Thank You Springfield For Your Support And Business.
... The word Springfield Links to the Contact page?

Kind of makes me go Wtf...
I would just get rid of the link itself as a quick fix, leave the word but don't link it.

Then...
I didn't take a really good long look at it, but I would recommend you go through it
and see if you find more stuff like what I just pointed out, that ought to give
you some things to do.

Tweak it out some, get the very bottom part to line up, maybe the top menu to fit all in 1 line too.

Peace out

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Old 02-13-2010, 01:04 PM
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Thanks, I am trying to have a SEO modify it.
Over all what were you impressed about?
I think i have To much info.
These days you got to sell yourself and what you do more then ever.
It is so hard for me to Present my company in 20 words.
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Old 02-13-2010, 07:56 PM
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Grammar:

Under "why choose us?" on the first page, it's "no job too big or small, not to.

Go through a few times, slowly reading each word. Check for punctuation, too.
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Old 02-14-2010, 12:46 PM
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Other then grammar , what did you think about it?
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Old 02-14-2010, 03:24 PM
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I’d say

“ Perfect Touch Lawn and Landscaping is a full-service company that can offer you a piece of mind knowing that your lawn or any landscaping project will always be in Perfect Touch. With a Perfect Touch, we will design and install four season plants, flowers and trees that will give you joy and inspiration year after year.

No more hassle or worries. We will maintain all plants flowers and tree’s to looks its best even if not installed with a Perfect Touch.

Just like the Perfect Touch, you will be surprised with our quality and customer service while still offering competitive prices. “

The more times you say your company name the more of a chance someone will remember it. You just don’t want to be annoying by saying it too much
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Old 02-15-2010, 01:08 AM
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I’d say

“ Perfect Touch Lawn and Landscaping is a full-service company that can offer you a piece of mind knowing that your lawn or any landscaping project will always be in Perfect Touch. With a Perfect Touch, we will design and install four season plants, flowers and trees that will give you joy and inspiration year after year.

No more hassle or worries. We will maintain all plants flowers and tree’s to looks its best even if not installed with

a Perfect Touch.


Thanks for input. I am curently redoing whole site in wordpress for better ranking and spiders.

Just like the Perfect Touch, you will be surprised with our quality and customer service while still offering competitive prices. “

The more times you say your company name the more of a chance someone will remember it. You just don’t want to be annoying by saying it too much
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