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Old 10-18-2011, 06:57 PM
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Not bad at all. Especially since you did it yourself, nice job. You've got your title tags all figured out and stuff

Graphics are good, navigation is easy. You have "referrals" in your About Us page; have you ever thought about having a "Testimonials" or "Referrals" page all to itself? You could include more pictures, and have some customers write up a paragraph or two about how good you are.. Just a suggestion.

I'm a bit OCD about grammer on sites like this so I thought I'd point out a little error on your Contact page. It says "If you sees Gary or Chase around town working or waiting..." That should be 'see' right?
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Old 10-18-2011, 07:08 PM
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Just like "grammer" should be "grammar".
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That's embarrassing.
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Old 10-18-2011, 07:10 PM
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Old 10-18-2011, 08:02 PM
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I did it myself.from a yahoo template Thanks for info
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Also page titles . They are taking on more importance these days.
Another important think to male sure you do is to sign up with local google business (places), yahoo,yellow pages and another overlooked site. The better Business Bureau.
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Old 10-18-2011, 10:25 PM
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Also page titles . They are taking on more importance these days.
Another important think to male sure you do is to sign up with local google business (places), yahoo,yellow pages and another overlooked site. The better Business Bureau.
Your right, I was able to place in the top 3 spots of google with 3 different page titles. All of them linking to my site, i also placed 4&5 from back links as well. As well as the number one spot on the google maps section.
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Old 10-18-2011, 10:48 PM
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Old 10-18-2011, 11:15 PM
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I need some help fellas. How can change my site design to a. More professional look. I used yahoo sitebuilder and want to upgrade
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Old 10-18-2011, 11:31 PM
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I need some help fellas. How can change my site design to a. More professional look. I used yahoo sitebuilder and want to upgrade
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I will admit your site it rather bland. I also found a grammar correction you should address in your about me section.

"One Krayzee Kajun Enterprises LLC is owned and operated me.
By me doing the work ,I provide a personal realtionship with my
customers. Something that is rare in the buisness ( Business is also spelled wrong)world today."

Im assuming you don't want that extra "me" in there.

I would also Change that entire line to something more like. "One Krayzee Kajun Enterprises LLC is an owner operated company, Being so helps build personal relationships with its customers, And helps make sure the job is done right the first time. Which as we all know is a rarity these days."
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Old 10-18-2011, 11:33 PM
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Also i have no idea why you decided to capitalize mid sentence like this????


"Locally Owned and Operated by Iraqi War Veteran
I have 13 years experience in lawn care.
i have BEEN IN BUSINESS SINCE 2005.
MEMBER OF BETTER BUSINESS BUREAU SINCE 2007
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Why is this all caps?
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Old 10-18-2011, 11:36 PM
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Thanks goldpro. I'm actually updating the site now.
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