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Old 03-11-2013, 02:19 PM
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The selling point behind off duty firefighters is that's who mows the yards, firefighters that are off duty, I don't know if people really care or not but I know it hasn't hurt anything.
What the other guys are saying is that this doesn't actually make much sense:
BZ Lawn Care is owned and operated by an off duty firefighter, and most of our lawn specialist are also off duty firefighters!

This would be a correct way of saying it:
BZ Lawn Care is owned and operated by a firefighter, and most of our lawn specialists are off-duty firefighters!
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Old 03-11-2013, 10:21 PM
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Great thanks, keep them coming my Texas grammar is not the greatest! Thanks for the replies
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Old 03-11-2013, 10:44 PM
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Great thanks, keep them coming my Texas grammar is not the greatest! Thanks for the replies
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No problem. Couple small issues remain...
- should be "specialists", whereas you still have the singular "specialist".
- "off duty" should be hyphenated, as off is a modifier.
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