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Old 04-12-2013, 07:48 PM
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Review my flyer

Im about to order 1000 flyers, give me your thoughts on it first
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Old 04-12-2013, 07:51 PM
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What's up with the phone #? make your is 2 words.Put 5th service last.
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Old 04-12-2013, 07:54 PM
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What's up with the phone #? make your is 2 words.Put 5th service last.
Lol i see my flyer has been cropped. Let me fix it...
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Old 04-12-2013, 07:56 PM
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Fixed

this should be right
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Old 04-12-2013, 07:59 PM
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I wouldn't order 1k of those. The flyer is all text and has nothing on it that draws your attention. You need to add something visual to make it more interesting. Do a google search for door hangers to get some ideas for layouts and graphics.
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Old 04-12-2013, 08:23 PM
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Yes!!! exactly what blade runner said.

No offense but... Its too much reading!
Think of it like a resume, You need to catch the eye of the consumer with something that will grasp their attention.
Nice Landscaping Pictures do this best!

But if you insist on using this flyer...

Capitalize your Last Name
Capitalize the "M" in mulch

After the "We offer the following services" there should probably be a colon " : "

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Old 04-12-2013, 08:51 PM
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Yes!!! exactly what blade runner said.

No offense but... Its too much reading!
Think of it like a resume, You need to catch the eye of the consumer with something that will grasp their attention.
Nice Landscaping Pictures do this best!

But if you insist on using this flyer...

Capitalize your Last Name
Capitalize the "M" in mulch

After the "We offer the following services" there should probably be a colon " : "
I understand, im working on a better one as we speak.
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Proofread Proofread Proofread!!! There are so many errors on that thing I would throw it away without hesitation at the glance of the first error. I count 4 major errors and I would change probably another 3 to 4 things to make it read smoother.
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Old 04-12-2013, 10:05 PM
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Newest one

better than the other one?
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Old 04-12-2013, 10:19 PM
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Much better. However, on the discounts at the bottom make the Fifth cut free line up on the left side of the parenthesis like the other two discounts.
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